I like it so far. This chapeter was a little short but I understand how hard it can be to find time to do anything. Can't wait for the next chapter.

“Hermione, I can do anything for you.” He replied, looking at her through his glasses. She smiled and kissed him softly. Well, how CUTE!!


“Welcome to the Caribbean, lads.” He said. With a clink of gold and fake silver he turned on the heel of his boot and swaggered in a half drunken sway in the other direction. Hmmmmm...a possible Pirates of the Caribbean crossover? Well, it would certainly be interesting! Hehe!!

Brilliant work by the way and I hope that you are able to update very, very soon!

Another cliffie, eh? Well, I guess it is on to the next chappie then.

Hmmm...definitely a great start!! On to the next chappie then!

i like where the story is going so far. i'll review longer next chapter because i have to go to bed. but seriously, good job!

I must say my interest is peaked! I'm really liking the story so far...if your other story Rain Over Me is any indication to you awesome-ness I'm sure this will be great!! haha Can't wait for the next chapter!

Well, you certainly have my interest. I definitely enjoy your writing style and hope to read another chapter soon. More than anything I like the vague start and can't wait to see where Harry has been as well as what he has planned.

OMG! please update soon this is an amzing beginning very original, like nothing have ever read before. i cant wait to read more its great!!!!

yes please pump it up, your just leavin me here! but fantastic so far, love stories where harry is badly injured, just makes a bigger reason for hermione to fret and take care of him, but please update soon, im waiting

Intersesting start. i'll look forward to see where you go with this! update soon! MMuuch muuch loove!

Interesting start to your story...wonder where this is going to lead us...please continue