Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/10/07
well until he get that antidote hes goign to be on thin ice. and what of hermiones confession that it was him that made her leave will she ever tell him? and did harry hear any of the stuff she was saying?update soon |
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That last line doesn't sit well with me. Harry seems to have tried to go on without her and she without him. She's the one that can't let him go, in my opinion. To be honest, this story is kinda hard to read. I've always found that stories with Hermione w/ someone else, but it is so well written that I think that there is little reason to stop reading. Keep it up. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/10/07
Oh, this is good. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work, and hopefully the next chapter will just flow right out of you. God Bless you!! |
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MaDeLaiNeSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/10/07
Someone called your writing brainless?? Mmm... i was going to say that this is one fantastic angst story, so now I'm wondering if we're all reading the same, lol.
I amost thought you had abandoned this, I'm so glad you're not. I think it's fantastic, and I can't believe I'm still alive after so much angst.
The one thing I'm confused about is the whole Ginny incident and Hermione and Harry's night. I mean, Harry wasn't with Ginny when he slept with Hermione, because he announced it later. But then, why he went back with her? Was it because he thought Ginny could be pregnant? How could that be? Had he slept with Ginny even if they weren't together, hence the incident? Really, I need help with this, I'm like super slow lately, lol.
I hope you update soon, this is a great story.
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Author Feedback: The flashbacks have dates. Harry and Hermione slept together soon after the war (he wasn't with Ginny). When he thought Ginny was pregnant was years later (Hermione was already with Ron).
Thanks for the kind comment. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/10/07
I can't wait for the next chapter. This story is just getting better and better. |
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Geez, this is a great story. I can't wait for more! |
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I really truly despise Hermione in this story...just make her go away and leave Harry alone. She can take Charlie and whatever other Weasleys she can cram up her ass...
Thanks for writing,
Matt |
Author Feedback: I think is so funny that no one seemed to pay attention in a little detail in this chapter.
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striderSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/10/07
Hurting Her!?!?!?!?
He's the one unconscious!
He's not the one who effed up!
He's not the one who ran away and broke off contact, like a little girl who can't get her way!
He's also not the one who came back dropped a antomic bomb, and expected no fallout!
Hermione is a complete idiot! she should be flayed for her selfishness and stupidity! |
Author Feedback: Do you think so? Or maybe you didn't pay attention in a detail here- and in the last chapters... |
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ZSigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/10/07
great chapter and i didnt think that hermione was hurting because of harry all this time that badly but from the ending of this chapter thats wat it seems, update sooner and i wanna c harry wake up and b all crippled around hermione and stuff |
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hi i just want to ask are Harry and Hermione gonna be together in this fanfic. I hope you can answer me.I don't want to continued if they not get together. |
Author Feedback: This is Portkey.  And I think there's an Author's Note in the beggining of the chapter. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 05/10/07
Incredible story. Loved the way you've put it all into words and really like the plot. Gorgeous. Next chapter please!! |
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LeonUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 02/10/07
Wow..... this is soooo good....
I love this story
please continue it
here's some thought from me
- make something like, that Harry want to forget Hermione or Harry said to Hermione to make him forget about her
but it's all up to u
whatever you make I'll love it
just continue this story so we can read it
please!!! please!!! write MORE and FASTER |
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wwwendySigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/09/07
oooh I hope everything goes well and that they don't resort to violence.
But honestly, when will Harry (or Hermione for that matter) get a clue? |
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it sounds really interesting I can not wait for the next chapter! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 12/09/07
This fic is very good, just like the one with belong to nowhere well written. I`m looking forward to reading more about it. |
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