Oh, my gosh, I have just finished reading this and I have to say, it is utterly brilliant! You know, I love your stories? The Harry and Hermione ship portrayed through your stories is always so mind-blowing. And now this story has me convinced of your talents. I love it. I absolutely love it! And I cannot believe its Angela. You know, slightly suspicious of it. But now it has been made clear and I'm wondering now how this is going to end. I'm anxiously biting my nails. Are they going to have to kill her? Or will there be some other way? Oh, I can't wait to find out more. This story is truly a gem; one of a kind. Cannot wait for more to be added!

Wow this is interesting. I thought the pendant was a horcrux considering that Angelica was drawn to it rather oddly so it must has a dark magic that pull innocent soul to it. But Angelica the real horcrux wow! And Harry’s comment on Angelica’s birth day as he relates it to the prophecy (When the seventh month dies) is a hint right? I am really looking forward to how they try to flush out Tom’s evil bit of soul from Angelica without killing her. Surely she would not have to die right? That would just suck!
Anyway, am waiting anxiously for the update now. Keep up the good job!!

Great story, and could find nothing to criticize. Looking forward to the coming chapters. Hope they come soon.

Amazing plot! I'm a history major, just graduated actually, and I love the Arthurian Legend. How you combine it is so masterful!

Can't wait to keep on reading!!

This was an amazing chapter; I think you might be my new favorite author. I just finished reading Forever Knight (and I will review it, I promise), so amazing! I love your writing style, and both plot and mechanical structure don't disappoint in either of the fics. Great job!

Oh my god you're so cruel!!! Angelica? That's why she's so smart and all that stuff? Oh no that's soo... poor thing... he can't kill her, there must be a way... oh man, hope you won't take that long again... until then!

FARRRR OUT!
i just caught up with your story today and i am loving every second of it!
I didn't like the way ron and angelica were, made me angry.
If she a horocrux you can not kill her!
i swear i will hate you forever.
she's the most adorable character.
you truly have a knack for keep a reader interested.
i hope you update soon
and make harry tell hermione everything,
her certainly should now.
goood luck.
keep writing.

roadkill

Intriguing story!
Secrets are somtimes necessary, but it seems there is alot of unnecessary drama when help is available if loved ones were trusted with the truth, even when all the facts are unknown.
Are you goimg to explain soon why Harry had to go to Avalon and why Snape stays(I guess that was hinted at)? Interesting that Harry trusts Snape now, but was ready to fight him over Dumbledore's death earlier. Why wasn't Hermione summoned to Avalon as well? I know not my story(I don't write, but I do enjoy reading your work).
Looking forward to the next chapter.

This chapter stressed me out so much, you have no idea!!!

AS with previous chapters you have done a great job of laying things out for the reader and giving us some really substantial interactions. You are masterful in the handling of the characters and I'm quite pleased to be reading an update to this very intriguing story.

I do have an "inkling", but given the complexity of your stories I'm not at all confident that my theory would hold water. I'm looking forward to reading more, in which I'm sure you'll obliterate my theories.

Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.

I read another chapter hoping it would get better but I was disappointed.

Your story went from good to lame in a big hurry.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... could it be? could it be? is ti really angelica a horcrux? what did harry turn out to be? some sort of a monster?

Oh wow. This is getting complicated! I feel so sorry for all of them. There is great tension in this.

im glad you've updated its been so long! so angelica is somehow connected to voldie? i luv the jealous harry part, hoping for more scenes between h/hr and i hope harry tells hermione whats his secret already. do update soon pls