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I came across Intervention and read it first. Jumped to Intervention II and was disappointed that it was paused. Mind you, I understand you wanting to do it well, but disappointed that I could not read anymore of the story. This story is interesting as well. I wrote a review of another author and said it read like Harry Potter meets Tom Clancy. You remind me of that. I think the one thing that most people don't consider with J. K. Rowling is that the series are essentially written from a children and young adult's point of view. Reading these stories show Harry Potter from more of an adult viewpoint.
So the Heron advocates tend to be more of the younger viewpoint and the Harmony advocates more from the adult viewpoint. I greatly appreciate your work and look forward to more. Thanks for a good read. |
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You know, it's peculiar. I have a sneaking suspicion that your motivation regarding the Death Eaters' probation has something to do with an American science fiction show first released in the 1960's, starring a bloke called Bill... Am I right? |
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LoupDeNoirUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/07/07
Don't know when you'll see this but its hours before the last book and I wanted to wish as many people as possible a Happy DH day, which is weird because I suspect we're all going to be quit a bit sadder in the following days. The end of an era, the last Harry Potter ever, very sad even without the thoughts of how many characters we love may die, let alone the horror and misery of OBHWF *barf*
So take care and remeber none of are alone as long as Porkkey is still here take care. |
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LoupDeNoirUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/04/07
Well personaly I'm glad this little biter got your ankle. Very funny, very good to have you back and to hear you are still working on "Intervention part 2" As much as it was just a bit of silliness, it was still well done with everyone very in character. I have wondered how Vold-i-snort would fare against a shotgun, but your high explosives topped anything I've thought of. Ever see that old animated movie "Wizards"? Kind of reminded me of that, very funny.
Well take care, again so very glad your back, hopeing to see more from you.
Cheers.
Tim
PS. Any chance for more "Of Wolves and Ravens" ?that is a great story also. |
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Nice one shot....it has been a long time since you wrote something...the alternate prophecy and all was good.
Hopefully something lengthier would come out from your stable soon...something like intervention 2..
i am heartened to know that you are still working on it...it was a fic with great promise....and though i have read many fics since then based on bonding between our favorite pair...nothing measures upto it...so keep going...
And such one shots in between will be appreciated as well...
Best of luck.. |
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LoupDeNoirUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/04/07
Good freakein' lord it's been waaayy too long since you've written anything here I'm so glad too see this! *does happy dance* I'm sneaking at work so I haven't even read it yet, but I just wanted to say welcome back!
Tim |
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Funny, though it would have been funnier if there were a friendly newspaper reporter nearby for Scrimgrour to explain himself to.
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Yay! Some writing from fenriswolf! It was rather amusing to see good old Tom betting on an H/Hr pairing - that was the part of this fic that really stood out the most.
C4 blocks as the vision of the Quandrangle, as amusing as it is, makes for a rather lame prophecy... it's rather hard to see the relationship. Yes, a C4 block is somewhat rectangular in shape, but it seems mostly unsatisfying.
Of course, seeing muggle technology defeat magic is always satisfying. |
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/03/07
Told you so. I just knew I'd enjoy it (despite taking two days to do so due to the untimely arrival of unexpected visitors). Brilliant - very wry and dry and tongue-in-cheek, all of which adds to the wit and humour. So glad it chewed on your ankles giving us readers some quality reading  .
Cheers,
Janie |
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HeidiHoSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/03/07
Bwah - that was quite brilliant. Well done. Good old C-4 - it never lets you down. |
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bradSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/03/07
A cute/quirky little variant on the 'Harry uses copious amounts of Muggle ordinance to blow Voldemort to smithereens' plot. Your introduction of the red shirts -- sorry, red *robes* -- in the first paragraph gave the came away that this was, indeed, a 'bit of silliness'. Still, you got Harry married to Hermione and living happily ever after, so it was worth the read! :-) |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/03/07
That was a great little story. It had a lot of depth to it and was really well thought out. I really liked the prophecy and it was quite interesting. Great idea on how the way will end. I wish that H/HR will end in the seventh book, but who knows. I can't wait for the next book to come out. HOpefully you've seen the new cover art, and if not, just check out mugglenet.com or leakycauldron.com. |
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um.......i dont get the part about the "vision of the quadragle". |
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It's good to see you back, it was humerous, especially the true meaning of the prophesy.
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EssedyssSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/03/07
Ah, good ole C-4.  It's good to see you're still around and that you haven't abandoned Intervention II. This was a great little story and I eagerly look forward to when you finally do start posting new chapters for Intervention II. Keep up the great work! |
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