Omg, please? Please a seqeul? Pretty please? *sigh* I was never good at begging. It was really really good though. I'm sad to be at the end.

Brilliant.
I loved the ending.
Great work!

Brillant... love is always brillant, scary yet brillant... lol
Just like that.
Likeit, lke the end, it was flufy!

Owwwwwwww it was so sad... her...capture me so completely. But I did. It’s just that I’ve dreamt, hoped, for so long that you’d see I was…
I nearly cried... nearly...

Owwwwwwww it was so sad... her...capture me so completely. But I did. It’s just that I’ve dreamt, hoped, for so long that you’d see I was…
I nearly cried... nearly...

An enjoyable little story. I like that you tried first person. I probably would have liked it better if it had been exclusively from one person, with action and conversations showing how the other felt. It was a little monotonous by the end to read every dialogue twice, especially since the first time gives away most of the good stuff. They also seemed to think and speak a little TOO much alike; the different perspectives just weren't... hmmm... 'different' enough to make it worth rehashing. Good try, though.

I'm not disappointed - don't worry. I'm kind of glad there was no dramatic kiss to be honest - life isn't like that (as much as we would sometimes like it to be) As for a sequel I really hope you will reconsider...you write really well and I know a lot of people would read it.

good story - liked the happy ending - great job! it kept me interested in what was going to happen!

hmmmm great job as always - can't wait to see what happens in the next one...

you've got me hooked here - can't wait to read more - great job! i want harry to just kiss her though!

aww poor harry and hermione - this is really good! great job!

cool - cant wait to read more - hope they can figure it out soon - great job~

aww i really like this! i like the 2 perspectives...great job!

I believe well played sweet moments are just as good as a quick timed "here's the end of the story" kiss. I like the introspective outloook through out the story. You played both POV's quite well without a lot boring "cut & paste" scenarios that I've seen with other stories when people are trying to give two different perspectives on the same moment. *bows* I thank you for giving us a chance to read most memorable tale.

Oops just realized I didn't sign in for my last review.. it was the "Miscommunication can tear things apart, NONcommunication never builds anything to begin with... So sad with the two of them feeling the same.. quite literally." one.. *cheer* I can't wait until the next chapter and I am thrilled to see you up and writing again!