This could get interesting to continue, watching this dance grow and change as they find what they really want, especially if it's with each other.

I'll be looking forward to future chapters.

beautiful. you must be a romantic. i had a little tear. are you going to write another fic soon???

I totally agree with you about Ron/Hermione. I just don't get how JKR says they are well-matched! This was very sweet (and it would be great if you could continue it!).

"he much preferred the sweet warmth of Hermione to Ginny’s fiery passion."

"their music continued, but their dance had actually just begun."

good wording. fantastic sotry. even thouhg is short and simple, it really unbelievable. I do agree with you and the whole Ron's perspective of beauty. and I mean, c'mon, JK has been hinting H/Hr.

Well. she always showed H/Hr throughout the books. She cannot just tell it would be Hr/R. Besides, you have to show, not tell.

Its sweet. I am totally in love with the Harry/Hermione shipps. You did a great job! Keep it up!

The line about the one problem, 'aside from destroying Voldemort's soul', was great, a nice little dash of humor.

Aside from that, you picked up on a point that's always bothered me about HBP, namely that the end of OotP was all but ignored, and turned it into a lovely little story that had wonderful H/Hr and managed to tuck in some nice h/c too. Thanks!

I thought this was a very well written and executed piece. I particularly liked the easy manner in which Hermione and Harry interacted; the way close friends are SUPPOSED to be (hint to JKR), and you deftly handled all of the inconsistancies that HBP dumped on us.

I usually like definitve endings and things clearly spelled out, but I really like the somewhat open-ended finish you have here. There was enough suggestion as to what will follow, but you left it up to us to paint the rest of that picture.

Great job; thanks for sharing.

I think it was a wonderful piece of work, so congratulations for this story.
Once I have read your author's note I realised you are absolutely right when you say that fifth year was completely left out in HBP: no Cho Chang, no DA, no Luna... I was surprised when she appeared in Dumbledore's funeral with Neville...
I repeat myself when I say you have done a great job to clarify those missed facts from OOTP.
Good luck, and until next time,
Sakura_txell

Thank you and please ignore any and all flames.Have fun and keep up the great work that you have done.

This was a really great story--and not just because I love the pairing, but because you made the conversation they had so real and so like them. There was nothing far-fetched, everything that happened made sense even in light of HBP and that's something not ordinarily found in HHR fan-fiction (well since 2 summers ago). You had perfect mastery of the characters, and reading something so sweet really put me in a good mood. Is there going to be any more to this story you think?

i agree with your statements about ron and hermione, it just seemed so callous how no one gave a second thought to sirius and the prophecy in hbp. yeah there was some talk about it but nothing in the way of grieving for a loved one. everything seemed to be swept under a rug and then thrown in a blender with the result being a somewhat confusing book(hbp).