Obelix72Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/07/07
A short story to think about it. You should write more of this sort! |
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KuraUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/05/07
I agree with your opinions. I believe personally that Hermione is just what Harry needs. I think your story was wonderful as well. Hope to see more from you. Best regards,
~Kura |
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‘Won Won The Amazing Wizard Plunger Boy’...HaHa!!  That was great!!
Wow...The way you wrote the interaction between Harry and Hermione was amazing. I know this may sound funny, but I could really feel the love that they shared for one another.
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noyljSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 02/04/07
The whole Ron/Harmy ship is so hard to accept. Harry is so much more a man and a caring/thoughtful person, it is hard to see any girl deciding that Ron would make a better partner/mate than Harry. The whole of book 6 was so unreal. Everybody ignored Harry's warnings. Hermy rejected knowledge because it was hand-written in a book, and everyone seemed to be under the influence of a love potion and a confundus charm.
I have always believed that canon would be H/G and R/Hr, but I have never believed that R/Hr had any reality to it.
Ginny grinding against some old dragon handler? Where is Molly the prude? |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/07
That was a great story. Very well put on your points to say why Harry and Ginny don't date together. I really liked it. Great job. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/03/07
awwww! That's so SWEET! i LOVED it! thankyouthankyouthankyou for posting it! |
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Good, nearly cried, but i ddin't... no... I'm stronger than this... I'm not going to cry... anyway... cute... I really don't know if you could say the both of them have... I don't know... pulled away... well... but there's definitively a way things to work out in the end... for us, of course... |
Author Feedback: Harry did pull away from Hermione, in OOTP she was the only one he listened to. In HBP suddenly he listens to Ginny?
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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Ohh I liked this one shot a lot. I think you... er... closed a lot of chapters of the real story with this, and that's a huge plus  I also liked the sweet kiss they shared and how they didn't need a big moment or something to realize their feelings towards the other  Very nice, indeed |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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Not going to try to rush out your version of what Deathly Hollows is going to be like? I think your approach has merit, though I might think Luna could work as well (but I guess not on this site). I do hope there is a little explanation as to why everything was so messed up 6th year, even if it turns out to be love potions. Anyway, it was a nice scene that could be turned into something bigger.
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Author Feedback: Nah...eventually....well down the road I might do a HBP and DH for Harmony shippers if it ends as it stands now.
I guess we'll have to be tided by DH in less than four months.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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Nice fic Matt. It's a good one shot. I like the dance... I never really thought about it, but they never did talk about what happened at the end of OOTP in HBP. I guess that's probably because Harry didn't want to talk about it. Great job Matt! |
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I agree 100% about R/Hr. Although it's been arguable since GoF that Ron fancies Hermione (although I suspect his jealousy is more a sort of brotherly protectiveness) there was nothing until HBP to indicate Hermione might feel the same way. Everything in Books 1-5 just screams H/Hr. I would still like to think Harry and Hermione might get together at the end of Book 7, but I'm not allowing myself to hope too much in case I'm disappointed. Nice story anyway. |
Author Feedback: Hermione tells him to ask her next time there is a ball....he tells her that she completely misses the point....that tells me he doesn't fancy her in the slightest. He just doesn't want her paying attention to someone else. He likes having someone make him feel more important....thats all it is in my eyes. The perfume...she called it interesting he didnt seem devastated by that. My feeling is some parties are pushing them together for the OBHWF....
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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Wow, That was amazing! I really hope Harry and Hermione get to discuss what happened in the Department of Mysteries in book 7. Yaay for Hermione realizing that OBHWF just wasn't meant to be. |
Author Feedback: Who really knows? JKR and a few publishers I suppose, but that's about it.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/07
I think you are so right, but I'm not sure if JKR's thoughts follow the same line or logic. |
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I'm really glad to see you addressing Harry's whine of panic at the DoM in regards to Hermione... How stressful that must have been, and those feelings just don't walk away, you know?
And... I really liked that Hermione slapped Ron. It' something I've wanted to do for some years now.
Great work!
Stephanie |
Author Feedback: Well, Harry did react similarly with Ginny in COS...but my proof comes in what happens afterwards. Harry fought Tom with no reassurance that Ginny was truly fine. It took Neville telling him she had a pulse to get him moving again in OOTP. That tells me something about Harry's feelings for the two girls.
Haha well Ron said something he didn't mean 'foot in mouth'...etc. I just get the feeling that Ron and Hermione really don't like each other but they hear everyone else talking about them and they assume that they would feel that way if together.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/03/07
that was really sweet, i wish something like this chapter will be there in book 7.
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