awesme stories so far...the only thing i think would have been cool is if mia and hermione worked together using water and air to save harry.....but still awesome story

Damn stupid bitch, Mrs. Weasley and Ginny both need to be fed to starving Blast Ended Screwts. Your series is damn good, I'm hooked.

I am really enjoying your story. Your new characters are excellent, and their relationships feel very realistic. I am having a hard time, however, with your plot. While its nice that you're sticking with canon, with so much foundation material (Harry with Sirius, not the dursleys, Mia, etc) different, I would expect much bigger differences in events. The original reasoning doesn't suffice in this new situation, and the logic of your plot wore a bit thin in several areas. But keep on writing, and I'll keep on reading! Thanks again.

Keep up the good work and I have added you to my favourites.

hey

these storys are my fav
are you going to write the fifth book?


Mara..

yay, great ending. their were parts in this story that made me want to both laugh or pull my hair out (like the relationship between harry and hermione). glad they figured it out.

im confused, is dumbeldore a misguided but still good person or a manipulative old man.

and the plot thickens, funny how molly and ginny want to wisk harry away from his family and loved ones. and how could anyone see mia as spoiled, it just seems she is a really good judge of character.

i have to ask, you brought up their animagus abilities at the bgeinning of the chapter but we have yet to see them use them. any chance they are entering the story soon.

Wow! Brilliant yet agein but i really would like to see Harry finnaly get angrey at Molly and yell at her and stuff. It's just not consistent with the story when he defends Hermione agenst everyone but Molly. Anyway, great story, still love it and i still think it's better than the original books. Keep it up! Please up date soon and thank you for your time.

Wow that was a great chapter! Molly is obviously up to something which doesn't bode well for Hermione I'm sure! I can't wait to read the next book!

I totally don't think that Mia is either selfish or spoiled. She never got to know her mother. That would be hard on anyone. Also the fact that someone was the reason that she died compared to something thing that can't make it easy. I trully must give my regards to the perfection on which you have wrote Molly's character. The same goes with Ginny's. I'm really likeing how you are able to put into perspective the negitive things about the people who are just tryign to take advantage of Harry.

I'm really surprised that no one has said anything about Sirius' disguise so far. I also think that it will be very interseting to see how things go with him and the Weasley's in the alley.

Nice wrap-up to year three! Poor Molly; she'll never know what hit her before it's over with, I suspect. Thanks for a fun series. Now, off to year 4.

This is really a good series, but I would like to know what is up with Hermione being the youngest? I always felt that it was the fact that she is older than Ron and Harry that gave her the greater maturity, especially in later books (past the Lockheart mess). Otherwise, good work!