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A Bitter Disappointment

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hagrid
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/07
As believable an any other viewpoint. Looking back, I guess I always was Dumbledore's man, but I too feel manipulated now that it is done, and I now see him as a flawed man as your A/N states. Great, but flawed. If he felt anything fer Snape cause he was alone, how could he not feel more fer 'Arry, seein' as how Snape was part of what made 'Arry left alone in the first place? If he is forced ter serve his hundred years I know that he will Still have ter face Lily and James, which will serve him right.
Author Feedback: I am a Dumbledore fan, and all I wanted to show with this was that he was flawed and he failed in truly preparing Harry for Voldemort.

I truly can't see why Dumbledore would have trusted Snape so unconditionally as he did. Even if Snape was stuck by the constraints of the unbreakable vow, Malfoy's life and Snape's life combined aren't worth Dumbledore's in the grand scheme of things. In chess it would be like trading a pawn and a rook for the queen. It isn't worth it, but then again I've never been a chess champion.

Haha yes, I had to add that bit from Lily.

Thanks for the review,
Matt
 

fallingmonkey
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/07
Not bad Matt... Not bad at all... The Fates? I never really thought of them the way you painted them... Although they're sort of like a good cop, bad cop kinda thing, with a 3rd that's neutral. Not bad at all though. Good one-shot. The last spoken line was great. “Next great adventure my foot.” I can see where he comes from though. You did make him a flawed man, which he is. His judgment was clouded by his own thoughts, feelings, and wants. Good Job Matt!

-David
Author Feedback: I imagine you'd have to have a sense of humor to have that job for eternity. The good cop bad cop bit I'm sure adds to the amusement.

Thanks for the review,
Matt
 

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