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A Bitter Disappointment

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fallingmonkey

Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/03/07

Not bad Matt... Not bad at all... The Fates? I never really thought of them the way you painted them... Although they're sort of like a good cop, bad cop kinda thing, with a 3rd that's neutral. Not bad at all though. Good one-shot. The last spoken line was great. “Next great adventure my foot.” I can see where he comes from though. You did make him a flawed man, which he is. His judgment was clouded by his own thoughts, feelings, and wants. Good Job Matt!

-David

Author Feedback: I imagine you'd have to have a sense of humor to have that job for eternity. The good cop bad cop bit I'm sure adds to the amusement.

Thanks for the review,
Matt

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