SochSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 02/01/08
I'm a bit confused about why the chapter is posted twice, but that's not really important, except that I was hoping for MORE when I saw there were 2 new chapters since I'd last read.
Anyway, other than saying again that these chapters are SHORT - I have no criticism. I'm still eager for more.
Thank you for sharing with us, and keep up the good work! |
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shshshSigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 07/07/07
Awesome story ... I'm waiting for more.
Please please update soon.
Till then I'll go through your other fics.
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KelseyUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 06/07/07
I've been reading this since the trailer, and I'm loving it! Especially:
'“My incredibly intuitive sense of the female mind tells me that you are troubled,” Harry said.'
Being a Pirates of the Caribbean addict, I started laughing so hard. I don't know if you meant it to be the exact line from the movie, because if so, it's "My tremendous intuitive sense of the female creature informs me that you are troubled." But either way, lovely chapter! |
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Great job! I love the idea for this story. I can't wait to see where you go with it...and obviously the H/Hr interaction. Update again soon! Pretty please. |
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Free28Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 22/06/07
Great story so far. The only thing that kinda bugged me was the letter harry wrote to Hermione, it didn't really seem like harry but this i your story and i'll survive. Good story though. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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that was a good chapter . . . . . .
i think this is shaping up to be a good story!
harry and hermione forever and ever ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
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Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/06/07
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Yeay, he has to compass...its just a matter of time for the adventure to begin! Thanks for the update, until next time! bye |
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ElfQueen13Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/06/07
Loved the story cant wait till you write the next chapter!
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That was a great start to the story ! ! !
Harry and Hermione Forever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! |
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SochSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/06/07
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Author Feedback: It really hasn't begun yet... |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 04/06/07
Ah, he is indee one beset wizard. *chuckle* Anyone care to bet that Hedwig manages to obtain that letter and deliver it, anyway?
This is shaping up as a nice start to a story. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/06/07
*chuckle* Nice teaser of a trailer. I'll be interested in the story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/06/07
god if I had a dollar for every letter I started writing and didn't send... I'd have a lot of dollars. and good grief! I've been wishing for an update on this one for a LONG TIME. huzzah updates! more soon please? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 03/06/07
This is a good start but is Ron gonna have a larger part than Tibby because than kinda gets the whole thing jumbled....he isnt just comic relief, he is also their strategist, look at Philosopher's Stone,
another suggestion you can make the chapters longer or have what would be normally 3 chapters in one, i personally prefer long chapters with long update periods |
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