fascinating story and though i'm sad that slit's teammates died i'm incredibly glad that he's alive and i'm looking forward to how the next chapter will turn out
excellent story, please please update as soon as you possibly can

Oh awesome chapter!! Love it!! It had a little of everything. I love reading about Harry and Hermione's building closeness, and although it was a very bloody chapter I thing it was great!! I would love to learn more about Slits life! I think he is a very interesting character!! Thanks for the update!! and congratulations for your 90 on APHistory! Well, I love your story and I'm a huge fan! Until later!

I liked this chapter a lot and can't wait for the next update!

Oh jeez, I'm nervous about Slit now. I really enjoy this story. The descriptions of CoJacks and the other agents and trainees are really well done. You did a nice job explaining why Hermione would be there. I loved how Harry 'negotiated' with the Minister of Magic and the description of the latest training exercise. I'm looking forward to your next update!

If Edwards was so stupid as so do what he did in a monitored training excercise, he would have been eliminated a long time ago.

In the middle of fighting Harry went on an appointment? I suppose Slit could have been finishing the very last death eater, but really the timing was way to tight for the minister to have been notified.

My first thought when someone fires a gun at me is not what would someone else think. It would be, what the hell are you doing and what can I do to prevent this crazy person from doing it again.

If you have this perfect lie detector and are worried about someone being an infiltrator, might not a few more questions be in order?

Even if this Slit is some young hotshot, that doesn't necessarily mean he can select good talent.

Hermione just happens to know someone in CoJacks? BTW, CoJacks, or Kojack as anyone alive in the 70s would know it by, is a silly name unless you are a balding detective.

I've been following your story for awhile and I really exnjoy reading it. I usually don't like things so far removed from a wizarding/magical setting, but this has been very interesting so far.

I know it is a bit nit-picky and obviously you have every right to ignore me, but... I don't usually brit pick because, one, I'm not British and, two, most things aren't a big deal or don't take away from the setting (like seeing bathroom instead of loo or something else) it's easy to ignore and doesn't take away from the feeling that your still reading something that is set in the UK. I have to say though that reading "African-American" actually made me stop reading for a second. It just totally threw me out of the story. I know the US is extremely PC conscious for various reasons and most don't want to seem like they are color conscious or whatever, but it just isn't a term that exists outside the US because, one, it implies the person is African and two, the person is American. It isn't a big deal to describe someone as Black in this context and the "American" part of African American is enough here that I think the American-term instead of something else really takes away from the atmosphere.

Sorry for the rant. Obviously in the scheme of things, it isn't a big deal, but still. Anyway, apart from that I really do like where you seem to be taking the story. I was a little surprised that CoJacks hasn't at least put everything Harry related on hold until Ben raps his head around the magic thing and figures out what he wants to do. It seems like something that would be a risk to an operation like that without further inquiry.

Great story, I see that unless the CJ team does not start intergrating magic and muggle fighting skills, people are going to die. The CJ unit seems to be very practical minded. Magic is to useful a tool to ignore. Bring the PM into the decision.
And please update soon.

Great job with the story so far. i had an idea for a story u could write, you no the disney movie sky high u could do something like that but it would be AU but its only and idea keep up the great work

Very good chapter I found Hermione Uncle reaction to her be a witch quit funny as well has her mom telling him off also can you please let somthing bad happen to that bastart Jasper he a real muggle version of Malfoy and he thinks he better than everone else and wants all the glory for himself it wouldn't sirpreise me if Jasper turned out to be or will be a spy for EYES looking forward to the next update please if you can you have the next update ready soooner and not take as long

Great story. I´ve really enjoyed what I´ve read so far. I enjoyed the way muggleworld and wizard world meet Slit seems to take things in stride. It will be fun to see more of uncle Lester´s reactions. (if you work those in of course) Looking forward to the updates

Yeay!! An update!! I'm a huge fan of your awesome story and I'm very glad to see you are continuing it! Thanks for the chapter! It was action packed and long!! And I'am thankful...hahaha until next time!!