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Another fine chapter. It is time for the kid gloves to come off and make the bad guys really pay. They want to do the crime, then they should reap what is due them.
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Very good chapter. It is going to hit the fan now and it should be very good. I do hope the goode guys kick ass and do not give the bad guys a chance. Take them out quick and clean.
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Outstanding chapter, now it will get very interesting. I did think Uncle Benny was Mr. L. Hermione and Harry make a great team. Good to see them back together.
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Another good chapter. It looks like it could get interesting very soon. Hope Harry kicks tail and takes names. Take the bad guys down hard and don't let them get back up.
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Good chapter, I am glad Harry is doing good and not taking years to learn and advance. I really like a powerful take charge Harry. Much better story that way.
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Very good chapter. Looks like Hermione will track Harry down soon. Could get very interesting. Hope Harry gets really powerful and is not a whemp. Hate it when he is weak and not incharge.
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Very good chapter. I really like Hermione, she is very smart and I really like that you have her with a family member that is where Harry is. Hope they hook up very quickly.
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Very good chapter. Hope Ron and Luna show up very soon. It is time to get the gang back together. Then they can take care of what ever is sent their way.
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Good chapter. Looks like Harry is getting into some thing he may need to beat old Moldyshorts. He will have to tell them some of where he goes and what he is.
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Good chapter. Very interesting start, really looking forward to see where this goes. I hope it is a happy Harry story. Getting tired of all the dark doom and gloom stories.
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 07/11/07
Interesting chapter. You have quite simplistic ideas about Snape, but perhaps you'll grow up one day. As for wondering about Jo's comments on Albus - why do you even care what she says any more?
Glad Hermione told Harry that he'd never defended her before.
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Author Feedback: "You have quite simplistic ideas about Snape, but perhaps you'll grow up one day"
Wow pstibbons, you REALLY know how to give people compliments lol
And can you honestly say that you weren't surprised when JK announced that, "Hey people, the headmaster was gay and yeah, he was kind of in love with Grindelwald,"
but now I'm okay with it. It's last weeks' (two weeks i think) news.
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lol yea no kidding a gay dumbledore. me neither. anyways, this story is amazing. i love it and i hope you update soon. there is nothing wrong with this so far! Hope you get another up soon enough! but i understand real life! good job again! getting better and better! muuch muuch loove |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 28/10/07
that was so great! at the end with him looking in the mirror and knowing that harry was there!wow! and so glad he made ginny cry!YAY! him and hermione are getting close, and he killed snape with his gun that was surprising. then everyone but slit died in that mission.wow it just got so much better love your story!UPDATE REALLY SOON |
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Exllecent Chapter I have to say Snape finally got what he deserved a bullet right between the eyes all though I was kind of surprised that Voldy knew about what a gun was since he so anity muggle and most wizards pureblood fanatics don\'t know the first thing about muggle weapons all though I was kind of disapointed that Slit and his team weren\'t able to put up much of a fight I was kind of hoping that there be a bit of a gun and magic fight for a few minites. Also take take Ginny sure the silly girl right is amazing at how blind the girl can be looking forward to the next update and well done on your History test and if you now have time don\'t make it as long as wait.
P.S. What the hell do you me Dumbledore is gay ? |
Author Feedback: See the thing is, I imagined that the teams were inside a very dark warehouse where there's no light. They wouldn't see the Death Eaters coming and that's what I meant about the "person in the shadows". Also, Death Eaters were technically quickly than wizards. They can apparate in seconds while agents would have to aim and then fire.
Also, woulnd't you be scared shitless if you were in their situation. Fear is a part of human nature. Yeah, they're secret agents for Operation CoJacks but they're still people.
Voldemort may hate muggles but remember, he used to live as one in the orphanage. Sometimes people forget that Voldemort "used to be" Tom Marvolo Riddle. They're technically the same people!
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YOU DON"T KNOW THAT DUMBLEDORE's GAY???? JESUS!!
lol, it was ALL over the news. Check out CNN (there was even a debate), mugglenet, and other Harry Potter sources. I would give you the links but I don't think links work on Portkey. JK Rowling announced during her tour in NY to children that the reason why Dumbledore never found love was because she always pictured him as being gay. He had an "infactuation" with Grindelwald (yes the enemy). I know this sounds weird but it's seriously true. JK rowling said it herself. |
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CibblerUnsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 27/10/07
blip..poor Harry, and that at 17. Writing stuff like that can't be simple.. I think..
Uncle Lester's reaction to Hermione and Harry's magic is still fun. But why he should talk to his sister about secrets.. seems he has just as many. |
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