(sigh) I wonder if the Durselys know Harry has a girlfriend. Dudley would b insanely jealous! I know he doesn't have a girlfriend! lol. I it! U R Gr8t!

Oh I like this poem out of them all. It's so sweet. And the conversation between the letters is nice as well, everything is not braodcasted but subtly hinted at...very nice.

Cool i like this story. it's cute and sweet!I can't what to read more of your wonderful wrok, please keep it up.
well this the end of this commet.
so i will with a cartoon ending that go's like this.
tha tha tha that's all floks!

huh? Huh? Huh? Is this a joke? I didn't get it.


huh? Huh? Huh?huh? Huh? Huh?huh? Huh? Huh?

awwee this is soo adorable.. i cant wait to read the next chapter this is a really cute story.. awee i love it!!!

Hi! Hmmm... I wish you hadn't written Hermione's letter with all capital first letters. I think the concept is great but there is little subtlety. There's no development or background. Just a tip. I think you're getting somewhere here but maybe you should spend some time brainstorming. That might help in the writing process.

please dont get offended nut i dont think your portrayal of harry and hermione is accurate

Sorry