Incredibly simple but powerfully moving. You have a gift with words. Please keep writing!

I love the way you wrote it. The last line stuck with me. very nicely written

damn thats really deep. lol. But I liked it a lot.

I especially love the last line and I think that it really sums up so much of the angst and problems with them starting a relationship. They are so pressured by everyone else.

Nice little story.
Good that Harry and Hermione can steal a moment away from the world for themselves.

I like the simplicity of this. Everything is left to the imagination. Wouldn't it be nice if this played out in Deathly Hallows?

Another beautiful piece, Herminia! It made me want to hear about what happened next! :-)

this was beautiful. you have a real way with words.

Thank you and please ignore any and all flames.Have fun and keep up the great work that you have done

Wow...it was very good. I liked it, the way its written makes it even better. Just one question...hahaha well, is this taking place at Bill's and Fleur's wedding? Very well done!! Bye

This was really very nice. I liked it a lot. It's nowhere near R its rating, though. I don't think it's even a soft PG-13. You might want to change the rating so some of the younger readers won't be put off.

This was really very nice. I liked it a lot. It's nowhere near R its rating, though. I don't think it's even a soft PG-13. You might want to change the rating so some of the younger readers won't be put off.