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So great! You really write good stuff! And this love scene was awesome! You are really inspired today han! hehehe |
Author Feedback: Hey, you're from lj! lol. Yeah, I think I was inspired today. Now, I have to do all of my homework 
But it was worth it.  |
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omgBECKYSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/03/07
Great Job! I loved the part where he goes "This. Is. Us" it was like...the best part in the chapter! haha but anyways, thanks for writing the love scene =]. |
Author Feedback: Thank you! Yeah, I liked it too. I can so see Harry doing that. 
/runs to see pics of Dan/ |
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Molly MooSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/03/07
haha yeah i went to the new orleans show and met them. they are really cool, honest, down to earth, guys. i got pics and everything. they were hilarious too. and the show im going to is april 14th in baton rouge. they are also playing in dallas april 15 but idk if they are sold out yet.
great ending!! i loved it! (but i think you can infer that from the million i love yous from my previous post)
oh and im just taking a guess, but are you excited about the new The Used CD?
and your going to end up hating me. but ive seen MCR in concert this year as well. THAT is an awesome show! (not as much as AFI but still amazing) |
Author Feedback: That's great! You've got to let me see some of this pics, please? 
Yes, I am super excited about The Used. Can't wait, really. 
About MCR, of course I've seen them and lots of times too. I'm from Jersey as well Not this year, at least not yet. But I have to see them this year bc I've heard so many great things about their shows this year. I think I might have to drive all the way to Pennsylvania. It doesn't matter, it will be worth it. 
Oh, almost forgot, thanks for the wonderful review! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/02/07
I think that you should write the love scene! The story is good so far and I think that it might add to the story. Good Job! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I will write the love scence. It might be up by thursday, I hope.  |
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great little piece, thank you! I like the parallel between daydream and reality, with uncertainty. When does Ron not provide comedy? good work. |
Author Feedback: Aw, thank you! You got my parallel. Hehee. Yeah, I wasn't really sure if Ron was funny here or not (because I am not a funny writer, nor person) so I'm glad you liked his character here. At the end, all was real, so they did end up together. Thanks for reading. |
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Hi, huuu she is really confident in this fic... can't seem to figur her like that. But I liked it, very fuff. A love scene would be good, but like you didn't write it before in the fic it will really no be necessariy... but if u want... ahuahua... Who am I to decline it? ahuahauah |
Author Feedback:  She had to be confident because she knew that Harry was just going to ignore it, as he ususally does. I will write the love scene. Thanks for the review. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/07
please write the love scene. I thought this was pretty good. I did however think the scene changes were choppy. |
Author Feedback: Hmm. Yeah, I didn't really know how to make them better. Thanks for reading and I will write the love scene as many of you have asked for it. |
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H/Hr LoveSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/07
Beautiful one shot. I loved it. It was really... sweet. I love the song by AFI that you've used, and it really fits in with the story.
If you have time, could you possibly read and review my stories? I would love feedback from an amazing author like yourself. Thank you, and amazing writing. Keep up the great work !!
-- H/Hr Love |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the way I incorporated Love Like Winter. I really love that song. |
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Well, if you write the love scene I am sure I will read it. It only seems natural.
I think it is a wonderful story.
Congratulations.
Sakura_txell |
Author Feedback: Yeah, I think I will start writing it. Thanks for reading. And does your name happen to be from Naruto? Even if its not, I like that same. |
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Molly MooSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/07
i LOVE you
you just combined the two best things in the world together in one amazing fic.
i LOVE you
going to an AFI concert soon.
now im more excited.
I LOVE YOU!! haha |
Author Feedback: You're going to one of theor concerts!? I hope you have fun (well, I'm sure you will). I still have to see them I wanna see them! Where are you seeing them? And thank you so much for the review! It means a lot to me, especially bc you love them and you think I've done a good job. |
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ahhh, I love this song. That's why I clicked on the story. If you haven't seen AFI live - I totally recommend it. Now to your story. Its well written and interesting. Whenever I've listened to the song, I've never thought of it in an HHr sense. See, I've seen the song more as a relationship that has gone sour, not one that is just starting. In this way, the story helped open up my interpretation of the song which I think is always fun, so thanks! |
Author Feedback: I am planning on going to see them live, but they are nowhere near me, yet. Besides, I have to convince the adults for that too. I'm glad I opened your interpretation of the song. i'll listen to it again and see your interpretation of it. Thanks for the review. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/07
write the love scene, this story is really good sweet romantic |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I think I will write the love scene. |
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RosaliSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/07
Not really sure when was fantasy or reality, or if it was all reality. It has potential, but, as you said, it was a first draft.
Cheers!
Rosali |
Author Feedback: Only the first part (the one before she called Harry) is a dream. The rest is real. Thanks for reading. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/02/07
Sweet. I love this song. Now maybe I shouldn't ask for this but what the hey. Write the love scene. Loved how you incorporated the song. Update soon.  |
Author Feedback: Thank you! It really makes it better when I know that you know this song and believe I have doen a good job. I will write the love scene, I believe. Keep and eye or two open. |
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I love that song. I like how you ended the story so it is left up to our imagination. However i wouldn't complain if you did post the next scene |
Author Feedback: Haha. Thank you. You are the second to ask that, so I think I will. |
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