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omg that was so cute hermione and harry totally belong together. |
Author Feedback: Haha. Thank you and yes, they do belong together. :] |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/03/08
That was very sweet in a way and quite poetic, iwth the song and I thought you entwined them nicely into the story good job!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. :] |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/08
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Author Feedback: oook? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/08
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Author Feedback: thnx? |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/03/07
i absolutely loved how u took one my fav. songs and worked it into this fan fic lol very nicely written |
Author Feedback: thanks for reading! I'm glad someone that likes the song liked my fic  |
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Hummm... how smart, aren't they? Practice Mr. potter? Of course practice leads to perfection...
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Good... there weren't lots of things before, you know... hzuahuah but good, the conversation was good. |
Author Feedback: Thank you and practice does make perfect. |
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This really was beautiful and I truly loved it! I love the song 'Love Like Winter', so it was really nice reading this fic, and as I read it, I could hear the song in my head, and it really added a nice touch to the fic.  I really loved it
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: I wanted the readers to have that song in their heads (if they knew it) because I felt it held more power. I'm glad you were listening to it. Lol. Thanks for the review.  |
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Wonderful. You've captured their awkwardness in making love for the first time  .
“I'll get better at it.”
It was a promised for future times. For other times.
That was my favorite part! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. Yes, I did want to get them to feel the awkwardness of making love for the first time.  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/03/07
Wow, great job at the passoin and the love. I really liked it. I absolutely loved the ending the fact that they became sillohettes. Great job. I love it. |
Author Feedback: Yes, I've had the line in my head for ever and I just had to use it somewhere. Thank you! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/03/07
Well, this was really really great. I really loved how the song went along with the fic. It went extremely well with it. Great job at the reference of Pumpkin Pie!!! Go Harmonians! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I know, I just had to have pumpkin pie there. |
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Oh! That's beautiful! Really. It's not too rushy or cheesy (sp?). Good!
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Author Feedback: Thank you! |
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It was a beautiful love scene. Though it seemed short for me... But just like they say in my country in Catalan: 'en el pot petit hi ha la bona confitura', which means: 'in the small jar there is the good marmalade'... or something like that.
Wonderful job, my dear writer, and I expect more from you some day soon!
Congrats,,
Sakura_txell |
Author Feedback: Thank you so very much. i know it wasn't much, but I thought it was fitting. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 01/03/07
Thanks for the follow up! I liked the first one and I like this! Perfect! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review and no problem. |
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short, sweet and enjoyable. thanx for the good reading material.
and major kudos for your choice of titles. that was what first grabbed my attention and lead me and my girlfriend to read it. this is one of the best short stories that i have found. (short to me is under 15k words)
i liked what i read and am adding you to my favorites list and am making this review long in an effort to get the notice of your next update or new posting. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so very much. Your review made me feel special, wonderful, and glad to know someone has found it as sweet as I did.
I hope to hear from you more often, there should be more readers like you, thank you. |
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Thanks for the update. It was a very sweet love scene. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading and enjoying it. |
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