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Nice. I loked how you had worded it.... It was good and I can't waait to see what other stories you will put up here.... ttyl
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Hi Bingblot! What a beautiful story. It's the same theme and the same idea. But you always present it in a way that makes it so unique! Good job! This is just as good as "Searching for Destiny" and it may even be better.  |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/07
that is sooo sweet.. of course, i can't possibly expect something horrible from you Bingblot.. gosh, i'm really your fan now.. good job... i can feel every emotion you want the reader to feel in your story... it made me cry!!!!.. i love it.. keep on writing more ok?
I support h/hr!!!
Proud to be a Delusional Harmonian!!! |
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I love this. I love how you've expounded on the subtle clues in the series that Hermione is attuned to Harry. I cannot fathom how a girl like Hermione could fancy someone who makes no effort to tolerate her causes and scorns at her intelligence.
Please keep up the lovely work that you do. |
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micmacUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/07
Awww.... you're really good at cute fluffly one-shots, you know that? it's really, really cute! harry and hermione do have this "connection" in all the books. even if harry's been linked with cho and ginny and hermione with ron, i still have that hope that the two will somehow end up together. we all know that hary and hermione re meant to be together. haha... i just hope it'll come out on "deathly hollow." i cant wait!
see you soon on you upcoming one-shots. |
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This was a lovely story. I simply love your stories: they are always well written and the love between Harry and Hermione always shines through. I loved how both Hermione and Harry realized their feelings for each other. Super! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/07
thumbs up!!  i totally love this one! i really have to say, i've read a lot of yours and i pretty much love ALL of them!!! |
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Really awsome story! Absolutly loved it! it was cute and filled with emotions!! it was really wow! |
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AmdornSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/07
Ahhhh, how sweet. Such a simple ordinary situation made extraordinary by one of my favorite authors. Your brilliant.
Thanks for the pick-me-up. |
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It was about bloody time that Harry found his peace, and his happiness... and his laughter.
I do think you have done an amazing job with this story, conveying their feelings and their thoughts so beautifully. Both experiencing new feelings but acknowleding them as if they had always felt like that. I like to think that, subconsciously, they always had.
I like how you divided the story in two parts, Hermione with her 'power' and Harry with his 'enlightment'. I think both words describe what, we Harmonians, expect of the last book of the series: Harry being enlightened that Hermione is his power...
You somehow have written it. Wonderfully.
I hope to read more stories like this in the future. As always, Bingblot, (I suppose I am repeating myself, bacause I am sure that I have told you this before) you are a fantastic writer.
Congratulations, and until next time,
Sakura_txell |
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Thank you and please ignore any and all flames.Have fun and keep up the great work that you have done |
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SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/07
i like the echoing of the fourth book. you know the "and she did something she had never done before..." and then you put "he did something he had never done before..." really classy. i mean, i'm not sure if you did that on purpose, but i liked in anyways. i'm always catching things like that. english major...guilty. really sweet story. when's your next one coming out? |
Author Feedback: I did do that on purpose. And no worries, I'm an English major too!
Glad you enjoyed this story; thanks for reviewing! |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/07
So, do you ever get tired of being so good? Really, I've yet to read anything of yours that has disappointed, and this new one is more of the same.
As another reviewer has already mentioned, this injection of some H/Hr fluff is both much needed, and much appreciated. I partucularly liked Harry's flustered disclaimer that he had no untoward intentions when inviting Hermione into his bed. Well done!
Thanks for continuing to gift us with these wonderful stories; it's truly appreciated! |
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"so this is peace"  i truly do not know what Rowling was thinking when she made Harry and ginny get together. what a blind fool, made it the easier way  but this was the right choice. ooh. i liked this. good work. |
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wow, that's a great little piece (of peace?) there, well done indeed. thank you for the fun read! |
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