CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/02/07
This was lovely hun, I really like it. Strong imagery, and for such a short ficlet, you can feel it emotionally too. Great job! 
~Cat~ |
Author Feedback: Thanks! *bows* |
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DeLovelySigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/02/07
Despite how bitter the story is (and its bitterness is real) I can't help smiling at Ron and his airports. Great job. |
Author Feedback: He is Arthur Weasley's son after all. The strange thing is that I wrote this while in one of the best moods I've been in for a long time. Blame it on the song. Thanks so much for the review. |
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I love the title, the album, and this story. It was so fast but wonderful at the same time. Nice work.  |
Author Feedback: Yay, another person who's heard the song! Thanks so much for the review. |
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This was beautifully done.
It was sad; I do hate to think that Hermione has died. (After all, I want Harry and Hermione to live happily ever after, even if this only happens at Portkey.) At least they did have some time together. But I loved how you have Harry fulfilling the pact, realizing her 'brainchild', thinking of her as he does so. It was also good that you had him purchase the house, before he torched it. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. I didn't want him to anything illegal. It is his house that he's burning, so he's not in trouble. He's sad, not an arsonist.  |
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Miss MadyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/07
Oh Lord. That is *so* good. Can I say that I'm glad that plot bunny attacked you? *is being cheeky* So sad that Hermione died... hope that doesn't happen in DH. I love the last line.
Mady
P.S. You need to get on Yahoo... *whistles... I'm not badgering you...  * |
Author Feedback: It's not badgering, it's merely suggestion. I hope Hermione doesn't die either. *hopes for Harmony ending with lots of children* |
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This was very short and simple, but very powerful.
Good job! |
Author Feedback: Thanks a lot! *is happy* |
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Oh my God! What beautiful piece of work! This is going to my favs! I simply love the way you write! Perfect! |
Author Feedback:  Thanks so much! |
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Beautiful. Too sad that Hermione did not make it, but I love how Harry fulfilled that pact despite Ron not being there with him. |
Author Feedback: A man of his word our Harry is. Thanks! |
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How sad! I wish Hermione hadn't died. And I can't believe that Ron bailed on Harry like that! But your story was beautifully written. Well done! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much! I didn't want her to be dead, but that's the way it fit.  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/02/07
That was awesome. Very sad that Hermione died, I'm glad to see that her and Harry had a bit of love together. Poor Ron. I can't believe that all would happn. HOpefully he can find his place... |
Author Feedback: Knowing our upbeat guy, he will. Thanks for the review! |
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Oh, how heartbreaking but at the same time a little bit heartwarming with the pact the trio shared and Harry had it fulfilled. I'm a little bit confused as to exactly how Hermione died, but I'm assuming that there was an attack at Hogwarts and in front of the library was where she got hit? Haha, yeah, I guess I could just go with that |
Author Feedback: You get a cookie for being correct! *hands cookie* Thanks for the review! |
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Great song.
'Because I'm gonna buy this place and see it burn
and do back the things they did to you in return'
Surprisingly dark and menacing stuff from Coldplay.
I do like 'No Mercy Harry' and yours is well written. What's up with Ron flying the coup though? |
Author Feedback: Yay, someone else who's heard the song! Once you really listen, you'd be surprised what you hear. As for Ron, he's always been in the back, never really able to spread his wings or just be himself without some type of criticism from somebody, be it his family or others in the school. It's just his time I guess. Thanks so much for the review! |
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Nice chapter. Sad that Hermione died. Hopefully we will get an update for Bewitched soon  |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I was writing the next chapter and all of a sudden this came out of nowhere. It's coming along though. |
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