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It is really good so far. i can't wait to see what happens next. |
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Fanastc story line. I think Hermione doesn't need anymore secrets and Harry right about wanting to tell her! She wouldn't blame Harry! |
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Naw, the chapter was great! I just read the entire story because I didn't start it last year. Really nice idea, and I especially like the new characters and interactions you've created... a little mystery about Hermione's parents, though  . The only thing that bothers me a little is that they've only known each other for... four weeks? And they're already using pet names for each other ("love"). Even if they are "soulmates" (haha) it just seems a little too fast. Eh, whatever. I'm looking forward to see what the next chapter will bring... whenever it comes  ! |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 17/02/08
hes going to lupin because he know that they all know!so thats why shes so distant to her but shes still crap to her real daughter!shes really a terrible aunt and mother.Hermione needs to be told!update soon |
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read it all at once, a really good story. i like harry and hermione relationship and i'm intrige by this secret thing. keep it up. |
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RowenaSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 15/02/08
EEEEEEEEK! OH MY GOSH! You are back! I am soo happy to hear from you! Yay! Woohoo! Um.. yeah. So... right, you did miss a lot that's going on in fandom, it's died down a little sadly but as far as I know, Portkey is still as strong as ever. I see what you mean about the chapter. I don't know, something just doesn't fit, though I can't put my finger on it. But that's okay, I think you just need a little time to sort it all out. Do you have a plan for the story or are you letting it lead you? Okay, I'll stop writing now, but I just like to say that I'm really to see that you are back again and as long as you are not leaving for good, I'll happily wait for the next chapter! |
Author Feedback: Rowena!! OH MY GOD!! oh dear i've missed talking to you!! I'm not kidding if there is one thing i've missed about fandom it's talking to YOU!!! Haha. All our little messages on Harmony Podcast (what ever happened to that by the way?). THANK YOU for being honest wiht me. I know, doesnt this chapter just feell...weird? I think its cause i wrote a lot of it a long time ago and when i went to redo MONTHS later cause i hated it i got bored nad i just posted it and was like what the heck. I think i just need, ya. some more chapters to just unravel it slowly. Well, i kinda have a plan but a lot of it is just winging it. LOL! okay girl, i'll stop this now and message u l8r.
Definitly not gone forever.
See you darling!! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 15/02/08
I'm not disappointed at all, to tell the truth. I just hope you'll be able to update soon! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 15/02/08
I loved it, yes! Brilliant one, in fact, if you ask me! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 15/02/08
Great chap, I really really liked it. I'm gonna head to enxt chap now though! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 15/02/08
Why is that Ferris guy there? He hasn't hurt Emma, has he? Bloody hell, if he has, he's a dead man, Harry will cut him in little pieces... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 15/02/08
Great chap, I absolutely loved it, every single moment. Well, not much when she was hit again, but at least Harry saved the day... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 15/02/08
Well, it's not bad. You were right in saying this was an emotional chap, and you wrote it well. |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 15/02/08
Really nice. i loved their interactions, this story is really going to be fun! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 15/02/08
Not bad. They met for the first time, and it was nice. I'm going to go see what next chap brings us, ok? |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/02/08
Nice start  Can't wait to see how this goes on, I'm really curious! |
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