For Merlin... what's that supposed to be? First bums? Then... McGonnagal doesn't gave them a detention.... and now... her father has been killed?

Uh oh.... I think it's Draco that sent the letter. I wonder when Ron will cool down though. I can't seem to imagine it will be a short ammount of time by any means but it will be interesting to see Ginny's reaction because no doubt that Ron will go and tell her and then both of their tempers will be a force to be reckoned with.... Okay well I can't wait to be able to read even more.

*%* Susanna *%*

oh my god !!! i cant believe that happened !!! ergg it sucks that Ron found them out because he will most likely tell Ginny && then EVERYONE will kno and then Voldemort will be really happy because Harry will be all madd and like will really really really want to kill Voldemort and then he will become unstable because Hermione's unstable ... oh the insanity begins !!!
Much Love,
Harryluver05 :]

Pretty good, but I got turned off by Hermione using 'kay and okie dokie. I don't know, but those words just don't seem like they'd be a part of her vocabulary to me. Besides that, it's a cute story. Till next time.

Nice story I like the cliff hanger you put in might want to have Hermione's realationship with Harry give him love powers to kill Voltemort.

OH MY GOD! that is one of the best stories i've ever read! is heremione's dad the chracter death? how does ron react? please update soon!

Nice job. Pain out of the blue. That was a good twist I hope you keep writing this story. I'm curious as to where you're going to take it.

"You don't own me, Harry. You have no right in telling me what I can and can't do. I'll go back if I want to go back. I don't have to obey you." ~ sounds strangely like a line from titanic

huhuhuhu The proposal was a bit... sudden...hauahua hey, cool... I was hopping a kiss, but since it was already a kiss before... I'll let it pass... ahuahau

u loved it! what's gonna happen next? who is gonna die?! it is a really great story and very well-written! please update asap! will hermione be harry's girlfriend?

Hey... so I just read all four of your chapters

Believe it or not, you're actually one of the better authors here on Portkey (you seem to think you're "bad" at writing because you're 14 - you're actually really good )

There's just one little thing that's kinda bugging me (I guess that's the wrong word but I don't know what other word to use lol)... some of the things here are so cliche (like him taking the curse and pulling her up over the wall)... but it doesn't really take away from the story.

Excited for the next chapter!

P.S. - "Cause every time we touch, I get this feeling. And every time we kiss I swear I could fly. Can't you feel my heart beat fast, I want this to last. Need you by my side..." - good song

Awww. This is a cute little story you got here. I can't wait to see what else you come up with!

*%* Susanna *%*

loved it...reminds me when i was trying not to fall hopelessly in love with my boyfriend...somethings just cant be helped...can they?? great job...hope you update soon...take care...
Pilar

wow! what a great chapter!! hermione does have feelings for him and him to her!! i cannot wait for the next chapter!!! update soon!!

sorry, but he did nothing against malfoy? Hard to believe. . . . . . . . . . . . .