THAT WAS SOME SERIOUS NEED RIGHT THERE MY FRIEND. EXCELLENT WORK ONCE AGAIN. KEEP IT UP HOPE TO READ MORE ROM YOU.  |
Author Feedback:  Thank you! I'm glad you liked the one shots... you should look at Best Friends... hopefully ill have an update for that one soon enough... before the readers ask for my head..lol...Thanks again for reading and reviewing...
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THAT WAS SOME SERIOUS NEED RIGHT THERE MY FRIEND. EXCELLENT WORK ONCE AGAIN. KEEP IT UP HOPE TO READ MORE ROM YOU. |
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it was really good, well done, it's like after cannon story, please make more |
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chills. this story gave me chills. good- very good chills. this wasn't the first time i've read this story, either. i've read this countless times and it still takes my breath away. wonderful, wonderful job. you are truly an amazing author. keep up the good work!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/06/07
the story needs better wording. you seem to use the same words over alot. but other than that its ok |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/07
Wow. I really like this story. It seems to me that you have a real knack for Harmony. The only thing I noticed was one or two grammatical errors, but they were unimportant in the stories entirety. Good show. |
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Excellent smut!! I loved it. Perhaps not quite as graphic as I would have written, but really good anyway. BTW - when Hermione says:
“If that was pain, then I'm becoming a sadist because that was abso-bloody-lutely fantastic, and I loved it. I never thought it could be this good.”
YOU MEANT TO SAY: MASOCHIST. Sadists gives pain...masochists take their pleasure FROM pain.
Other than that, I thought you did a great job.
Regards,
the_scribbler@shadowgard.com
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Author Feedback: Thanks for your review and thank you for pointing that out. I was rather hoping no one would notice  I kind of realized the mistake until I was reading it after it was posted. I made another little mistake, but...  Well, thanks again for reviewing.
~Rodare |
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Excellent smut!! I loved it. Perhaps not quite as graphic as I would have written, but really good anyway. BTW - when Hermione says:
“If that was pain, then I'm becoming a sadist because that was abso-bloody-lutely fantastic, and I loved it. I never thought it could be this good.”
YOU MEANT TO SAY: MASOCHIST. Sadists gives pain...masochists take their pleasure FROM pain.
Other than that, I thought you did a great job.
Regards,
the_scribbler@shadowgard.com
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/04/07
You have a way with words I'll give you that. The reader can instantly visualize what's occuring in the story vividly |
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That was great ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
harry and hermione forever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/04/07
“No,” he muttered. “In my room, in my bed…”
lol, that sounds like plot to me. Sharp writing btw, left me with a limp. Don't worry though, it's just a flesh wound.  |
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 great fic, i reallly luved it, i thot it was uber cute... especially fond of the dunbledore note! |
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Sum 1Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/03/07
That is one of the sexiest things ive ever read.
thats all i have to say.
it was Brilliant.
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alayneniSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/07
Nice story. Interseting Universe. Albus Dumbledore is a wise man, lets hope Harry goes for Hermione and Not Ginnt! |
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