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Finding Our Way

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 11/07/07
I in joy your story a lot! Please keep up the great work!
Author Feedback: Thank you!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 25/04/07
again i got confusing going back to the beginining with the spell hitting harry and having what seems to be split realities but i'll give it a shot still and see what the next chapter(when its posted) brings
Author Feedback: Hello. Thank you for taking time to read and review. Thank you also for hanging in there, even though it's confusing for you! I do hope the next (and most likely last) chapter clears things up - for everybody!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 25/04/07
confusing very confucing not sure i understand the transition and its sad as i was just getting into the story
 

AJ Potter
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 23/04/07
Intriguing and interesting...this is a great piece so far, very captivating. You write well, and I like the images, and how they find each other. Curious to see if they suggest that the healer's spell has side effects with the binding he did. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author Feedback: Hello! Thank you for your review! I was really hoping someone would comment on that (I have to admit, I borrowed part of that from a very old Celtic wedding ceremony I read about - not to mention broom being used as a wedding blessing). I enjoyed putting that part of the chapter together, looking up ingredients and whatnot. Thanks again for the great review!
 

mimi
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 23/04/07
I LOVED IT!! omg dont tell me that the end is near?!!!!! lol well i loved the chapter! great job! update soon!!
Author Feedback: Thank you very, very much!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 6 | Date : 23/04/07
This was another great chapter. How many more chapters do oyu think there will be?
Author Feedback: Sad to say, I think there will be just one more chapter. (Although, this story has taken on a mind of its own, so anything's possible.) Thank you for the review!
 

AP
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 23/04/07
Interesting. I'm still a wee bit confused, but I'm guessing that Voldemort's spell split them into two possible realities? One where Hermione had been injured and the other Harry?

Maybe?

Looking forward to the next chapter - I'm anxious to see how this all wraps together! Thanks for sharing, great job as usual!
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for the review! (It's always nice to see the same people come back and stay throughout a story! )
Hmm... now I think I may have the smallest inkling of how JKR might feel when someone asks her something she doesn't want to answer!
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 23/04/07
Whoa, that's an intense ending to this chapter. I like the way the story is working out, with Harry and Hermione seeing exactly where their decisions lead them. Now comes the challenging part of telling Ron and Ginny.
Author Feedback: Hello! Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you liked it! Yes, Ron and Ginny... always a problem!
 

harry_mione_love
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 23/04/07
ahh... maybe finally i'll get to understanding this better next chapter. its coming along. update soon! Muuch mucuh love!
Author Feedback: I'm am hoping the next (and most likely last) chapter will clear everything up! Thanks for reviewing, and hanging in there!
 

JanieB
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 22/04/07
Oh YES!!!!!! Even despite those myriad alternatives, they find each other...*sighs happily* Still completely enjoying and totally fascinated by all this dear - brilliant story! Keep up the fantastic work!!
Janie
 

AP
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 21/04/07
My apologies for taking so, so long to review this latest chapter. RL has been crazy, so this is the first time I've had a chance to sit down and read.

And now, of course, I'm hopelessly confused. Interesting things happen here, as if Harry and Hermione have changed roles. But why?

I'm anxious for the next chapter, as this one created a lot of questions. As usual, though, it was well written and entertaining to read. Update soon and thanks for sharing!
Author Feedback: Hello. No worries! Confusion seems to be a recurring theme in most of the reviews for this chapter. I do hope that things will start to make sense for everyone soon. I didn't mean to confuse everyone, really!
Thank you for sticking around, and for reviewing! I'm looking forward to the next installment on A Long Way From Home!
 

pottercrazy
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/04/07
Your storytelling is simply awesome. I got lost in the imagery your words conjured that I think I lost the plot somewhere. It was, I'm happy to say, not an unpleasant experience. I simply reread again (now where did I hear that advice before? )and I think I am where you intended for us readers to be - hooked for the next chapter!
Author Feedback: Thank you for your great review! Your comment about rereading made me laugh! (In a good way!) I'm glad getting a bit lost wasn't a bad thing. When I decided to call this, "Finding Our Way," I never realized it might apply to those reading it, as well!
Thanks again!
I'm hoping to have the next chapter up within a couple of days. *crosses fingers*
Hope to "see" you there!
 

Shane!ComeBack!
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 12/04/07
Very nicely done, especially the bit about the divergence of different realities, but I am confused. How does this chapter tie into the previous chapters(s)? Beforehand, Hermione had been hit with an uknown spell and finally, after Harry's assistance, had woken up. Now it seems to be the reverse - Harry is unconscious and Hermione is caring for him.
Author Feedback: Hello. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! This chapter starts chronologically the same time chapter one started, which was right after Voldemort's defeat. Hope that helps!
Thank you for all your reviews, and for staying with the story!
 

Shane!ComeBack!
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 12/04/07
Very nicely done.
You did a good job describing the various characters and their interactions.
 

Caity
Unsigned | Chapter : 5 | Date : 12/04/07
Aw, I love this story so far! It's cute, sad, and frustating all at once. Please continue soon!
Author Feedback: Thank you so much!
 

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