great story! i cant wait to read the rest of your stories!you are an amazing author!keep up the great work!

Interesting take on things. Surely it can't end here though - this can't be their original universe.

I came acros this fic today and read it all in one shot. You are a very talented writer. I greatly enjoyed the journey on which you took the reader. I look forwsard to the next adventure you pen.

Wow very good story but kinda confusing, did they both get hit with the same spell or different ones, any way it was really good

*laughs* Now -that- is quite the ending, amidst all the varied "what-ifs", they land in the most congenial one (then again, I suspect that if they feel as strongly about each other as they appear to, their hearts or subconscious would hunt for and select such a reality). It was a truely dark and sneaky move on Tom's part, but it floundered on a consideration he never even expected to be involved, and therein lies his final defeat and downfall.

'Twas a great story that I've thoroughly enjoyed.

Hmm, so both versions of Harry & Hermione are now wandering and exploring and all coming to the same conclusion. This is going to get -real- interesting when all of them awake, especially if there ends up being a link between the two versions of either one of them. I did like the way the selection process went for both and I loved the way it was brought home to Harry that the job became his because -he- was the most suited to do it without getting corrupted or other failing.

Hmm, and in an alternate reality it's Harry who's been hit and having problems but -that- Harry's spirit is taking a somewhat more exploratory look at where he is and at what might have been and what could be from there. 'Twill be educational to see how the two worlds interact and what each Harry and Hermione chooses.

*Laughs* Erised Press? Now there's a tip-off, or an anvil-sized clue, if I ever saw one. I like the way this chapter progressed as both Hermione and Harry found that direct action as opposed to passive action worked better for both of them. I will admit, the differential time dialation between where ever Hermione was and their reality was quite extreme and interesting, I have to wonder what, if anything, that indicates about where she was.

It was good to see both Hermione and Harry start to realize things that both, apparently, had kept locked down inside themselves, though I really do feel somewhat sad for these versions of Ron & Ginny.

The ending of the chapter was definitely something of a bittersweet cliffie.

Yeah, I caught the Tolkein reference and chuckled. In a way, this story does sound like an epic quest, but with some different twists. Anyway, they're making a little progress, but not much.

On another topic, 'twill be interesting to see how Harry reacts to Ron's admission as I'm suspecting that one reason he can connect with Hermione and Ron can't, at least so far, is that there's a far stronger connection 'tween Harry & Hermione, even if neither has yet recognized nor admitted it.

Hmm, curiouser and curiouser, that was quite the different spell/curse, or was it a combination of a couple different ones intersecting and interacting with unpredictable effects and consequences? I can see lots of possibilities here and it seems likely that treatment is going to be very much trial and error - lots of error of necessity and a real trial for all involved.

A valid lesson there, at the beginning. I admit to being a bit surprised that not one of the wands found cast the spell; this indicates, IMHO, that one DE, or more, was disillusioned/cloaked/otherwise hidden and managed to cast that spell and escape in the resulting turmoil. I suspect this party, or these parties, to reappear at most inconvenient times for our heroes (that is, of course, whey they're called 'the enemy' ).

YES!!! Oh, that was just wonderful! And it was just brilliant reading "The Story so Far" - fabulous idea, dear! Very clever, too - old Voldymoldy would be proud of that evil, twisted idea! And speaking of twists, I love the little one at the end with the "Ron and Ginny are ok with us" reality! (Harry: "I don't suppose anything else is different..." Hmmm, *Janie scratches her chin*, Valancy's not planning on a sequel, is she? 'Cause if she is, there's an opening, right there!) I also loved: "It came from our hearts, a place much more powerful than our heads." ::sighs:: Just lovely!

Do you know, that's the first time someone's sent me a hello and hugs in a story??? Thank you sweetie!

Hugs
Janie xoxo

I'm glad to see that you did finish it. I hate when stories aren't finish. I thought that it was pretty good but I was confused a little in some parts but was able to figure it out after re-reading those parts.

Just found this story - it was a lot of fun. The twist in the middle caught me by surprise, but I appreciate being surprised in a fic.

The writing is solid, and the plot moved fairly quickly. he last chapter was a little bit mush-heavy for my tastes, but as it also did the moldiemort thing, I can deal with the bracketing mush. I would have liked the scene to go a bit longer and have a bit where Harry & Hermione talk to Ron & Ginny... whatever reaction you would have given them. The punch-line at the end is definitely a bit of fun, but it could have used a better set-up.

ANYWAY, I loved it. Thank you for sharing this with us, and please keep up the good work!

Sniffle....I was hoping that they would have to endure Ginny & Ron thinking that Harry & Hermione should be with them. *G* But this is ok also.

Lisa