Hey I read this after Book 7 came out and just like you suggested I placed this page on the crappilogue. NOw it's not crappy no more. Thanks for the short ans sweet story

ooo wow i absolutely LOVE these lines

"""Hermione propped her arms up on his shoulders as she rose to her feet before she said, “What’s one more adventure?”

Harry grinned as he too slowly rose to his feet, “I’d say that loving you is going to be our greatest adventure yet.”""""


its just sooo super romantic

Kind of reflective, isn't it? Like they're thinking out laud... well very good, I mean, I like the ideas, but don't know if these conversation would ever happen at all. That's the angst part, right?

You still didn't torture DD. Harry must go on his spirit walk and face his worst enemy--the white bumblebee. This confrontation will give him the power to defeat the bad man. Then, after the spirit journey, DD will spend eternity suffering what Harry suffered due to his manipulations and Tom will experience all his victim's pain for eternity. Snape, of course, has to face eternity being the victim to a demon that looks just like James...
Oh, happy days and bliss...

Awww, this was lovely. I'm going to do as you said, and if 7 doesn't end well I'm going to consider your version here as the true ending. I can't bear to think of it ending any other way to tell the truth. It really is a lovely ending, and I love that you ended it with the word scar -it's perfect. Great job and thanks for sharing!

~Cat~

Nicely done. I like how the whole thing felt natural instead of forced.

Good job.

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

It's a short sweet one-shot. Not much of a plot in it but since it's one-shot, doesn't really matter. Nice work! Cheers!

Thank you for this. I think most of the angsty/depressing stories on PK lately are mirrors of how some of us are feeling as we approach the release of DH this summer. Most of us still hope, but now refrain from being wholeheartedly invested because we don't want to be so awfully disappointed again.

Your fic was a good breath of pleasant air. I enjoyed how comfortable Harry and Hermione's interaction was. Your dialogue flowed well and seemed perfectly in character, unlike much of HBP's. Very good ending sentence--I've wondered how JKR will use "scar" and I'll not be surprised if it's something along those lines, if possibly not H/Hr.

Nice work I am sad to say I think you will have to "tack on to book 6 if book 7 ends up as a bust." We may not like it but the ships have sailed Thanks for writting.

Well, extremely intersting. Great job. I really really liked it. Lovely job.

Good plan, we'll mix them up in the peanut butter and honey then chuck them into the manure spreaders. She had better get book 7 right ... or else!

I think it was brillant!!!!!!!!!

I have a feeling that you might be right, that

Hagrid will be one of many who will not live to

the end of the book. Please post more soon. I lov

your stories so much

Until next time
Gloria

If book 7 doesn't end your way (or mine) I'm gonna burn every copy I can find.
H/Hr forever

That was so cute! That's is totally how book 7 should end. Thank you for an awesome fic