HARMONYUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/08/08
WOW THIS WAS REALLY ANGSTY I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR OTHER STORIES ESPECIALLY "SAY THE WORDS" THAT WAS AND IS MY ALL TIME FAVORITE STORY
PLEASE PLEASE REPOST IT EVEN IF IT'S JUST A FEW CHAPTERS IT WOULD BE A START ! |
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What did Ginny do? You should write an evil Ginny story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/03/07
I think that it was sweet that Harry apologized to her.
Rating: 10/10
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/03/07
brilliant dtory filled with emotion! i really want to know what ginny did tho and what happened to your other stories |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/03/07
I don't think Rowling has the courage to make Ginny reveal her true self (evil, bitch, slut, etc) in book seven, bur sure hope I'm wrong. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/02/07
What did Ginny do?! How did she betray Harry? That is one very intense and shortest story i have read so far. |
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CaliburstSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/02/07
A very nice little scene. Though short it had a great emotional power to it, and it's cool that you were able to make the fic as dense as you did. Keep up the good work- I look forward to reading more of your fics! |
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oh come on... you can't NOT tell us what had caused him to go... all... AHH like that... what?! What was it?!
keep it up
can't wait for more
-megz- |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/07
Great story. It really captivated me and the ending made me wanna read more. |
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Well, you weren't kidding about the angsty smut... It was short, and to the point which I thought was great! It was a awesome one-shot, and was written very well. The only thing that is nagging me is that I really wanted to find out what Ginny did that betrayed Harry. |
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Wow, very well written. You describe so many emotions and everything without having to even give away what it was that Ginny did to betray them. Very intense and angsty. I hope you continue (either with this story or with other one-shots in this universe). |
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Another amaizing story, you can feel the pain, the raw and the angst in everywhere, this story has lot of potential if you decided to make it a long story.
Excelent as always. I am still wayting for you "Say the Words". Keep the excelent work
Ana
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This was a beautiful story, very well written, very intense and powerful. The depth of Ginny's betrayal and Harry's subsequent pain are apparent, as is Hermione's love.
After reading this story, I am so very curious about the unwritten background. What did Ginny do to betray them? How did Harry and Hermione get together? What will Hermione do to make Ginny pay? Is her betrayal connected in anyway to the fact that Harry is now with Hermione? I can easily see Ginny wanting to 'get even' with Harry if he takes up with Hermione. A Ginny betrayal is possible: after all, Ginny is short for Ginevra, a form of the name Guinevere, and Guinevere betrayed King Arthur.
One little thing - shouldn't 'tenetively' be 'tentatively'?
Again, great job! |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/07
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sad2bsonyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/02/07
nicely done! I hate Ginny, she must go down in flames!!!! |
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