IMiSsUxoSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 03/07/08
absoulty love this story. one of the best i've read ina long while |
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JulesUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 03/07/08
I loved this fic! I hope you update soon!
Harry and Hermione are just the way I always thought them to be!
XOXO |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 25/05/08
O.M.J. (Oh My Jonas) This was soo amazing. I got(a feeling, too good for words) This is amazing. UPDATE! PLEASE! |
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wow, that almost made me cry. The very end is one of those 'awwwh' moments that you see in the movies that bring you to tears. And then the entire talk with the dad really hits home for me. It makes the characters seem so...real. The way the dad cares so much for hermione and then the effect it has on harry. Its the perfect relationship. The dad's overprotective but the girl loves the boy soo much that she doesn't care. Its very sweet. Good job! |
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awh. yes, of course, its the very stereotypical reaction. 'yay.' I would have seriously laughed if they had hated it, but, its great just the same. I really like the way Harry is questioning that hermione really wants to get married. It makes him more human rather than the 'gryffindor god' or 'prince charming.' This chapter is short and sweet, but its amazing none the less. great job! |
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awh, how sweet. The way you let the audience in on harry's frustration really adds to the character--lets me really feel what harry feels. Also, I like how it seems that no matter what, something always has to interrupt Harry everytime he attempts to ask her out. And then, the way he just blurts it is really realistic. I really like it. mhm. very good. |
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This chapter was bloody hilarious. With quotes like 'why can't all men be like matthew mcconahay' and the 'if i was STRAIGHT i wouldn't be dating you.' Wonderful, simply wonderful. I like how you made Robbie more human in this chapter. And then the way hermione analyzes it makes it even more believable because I know many gay guys that are just like that. Make everyone else happy and then worry about themselves when they are alone. but yes, the waiting to ask the question is rather annoying, however, i really like how it is building the suspense to the inevitable 'marry me.' |
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aw, its so cute. The way you describe Loan and his words. And then the way you make Robbie. It fits sterotypically, however, it almost adds to the flair. I'd almost want to see him more...manly...something else that breaks the mold. However, i really like it. And i can guess what Harry wants to ask Hermione...i'm just that good. But yea, great intriguing start.  |
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I didn't like the chapter from a H/Hr-shipper point of view for obvious reasons but I can tell where you're coming from. I guess it's necessary for the plot to go on...
Hopefully you update soon but as always there's problems in RL that can pop up (especially school, BLEGH). |
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HeidiHoSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 21/04/08
Er, she'll fight with Harry over something they HAD agreed to (a magical wedding) but she'll let a grandmother she hasn't seen in 8/10/12 years run roughshod over her and convince her to have a muggle wedding? She ain't all that bright, especially to bring it up when Harry is clearly out of sorts. |
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HeidiHoSigned | Chapter : 7 | Date : 21/04/08
Is it my imagination or have your time lines gotten mixed up? In your first story, Hermione had been gone either for 8 or 10 years, making her 25 to 27, presuming she left at age 17. Then in this story, you said Hermione hadn't seen her grandmother in 12 years, then 10 years (not since she got her Hogwarts letter which would have made her 11 at the time), which would currently make her either 23 or 21. If she hadn't seen Harry in either 8 or 10 years, that's almost the same amount of time as Grandmother - that math don't work unless I'm missing something.
Oh, and Hermione just caves? In what universe?? Of course Hermione doesn't run away normally either, so.... |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 17/04/08
what is his problem???!!!that was so uncalled for, she wants her family there thats understandable!update soon PLEASE |
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shardracoSigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 17/04/08
I actually like it... I like angst and drama...
Too much sugar is bad, you know...
I find it totally perfect..
But I really do miss Robbie, though.. bring back Robbie!!!!
and I'm hoping to see more of that "apple" that ginny was eating..ahahahaha! |
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i cant wait tor ead the rest of this story!its reall good so far!keep up the amazing work on it! |
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o0o0 very intense!! crazy drama. omgosh. i wonder what harry is going throught... update soon! |
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