On another note, the one thing I like about your stories is the bonds of friendship that is a recurring concept in the stories of yours that i have read so far. The office is my favourite and I can see the same closeness of people in these two fics. It makes the story a more enjoyable read

What a cute little ficlet. I watched Scooby Doo two tonight (my inner child talking ) and the eight friends reminded me of Mystery Inc as they were planning and scheming to get our heroes together. I would have thought that hermione would have figured out that it wasn't harry that sent the note because boys aren't allowed in the girls dormitory's and hannah and ernie they suprised me because they arent in Gryffindor lol ( I thought it was a nice touch though) Overall I enjoyed it

this has to be the cutest little story I have ever seen. Friends are normally nosy like that, and you took that challenge and made it wonderful. Congrats!!

oh my gosh. i absolutely adore this fic. it's so cute! what an adorably sweet way to get two people to realize they're in love with each other. [love the mention of "Full House" too. i love that episode! anyway, very very well written and i can't wait to see what else you can come up with!

I really liked this story, especially how sweet it was. It was a very enjoyable read

hauhau the end was very funny... well that's something I don't imagine... a graduation. But I hope that it will be one.

Oh my gosh- this has to be the sweetest thing I've ever read. It's so awesome.
You're an amazing author.
Keep up the good work!
Luv the Office as well!

awwwe thats adorable.. i loved it soo much!! its soo cute!! && i mean it was little kiddish && i just loved it!!

Well, while this was enjoyable in the fluff sense, there were plenty of little mistakes that kinda made it hard for me to really *like* and completely enjoy this fic. I know that you said you were doing this one while it was really late, but you really should find a Beta and have them look it over first. They would catch those things (Ginny sleeping in the Dorm with them, the Ernie and Hannah thing, the grammer/spelling mistakes, etc) and that would have made this a really great fic, instead of mearly a good fic.

And I know that this took place in about a 24 hour period, but the whole thing has this really *rushed* feel to it. I know that it's a one-shot, so you had to make it happen in a fairly short time, but I think this would have been better off a chaptered fic, or even just a really LONG one-shot. You could have gone into more detail about things, and not rushed it. *shrugs* Sorry, that's just my opinion.

I did smile and chuckle at their antics in the end though. And I'm sorry for the negative comments, I hate making them... but I thought this could have been great, so I wanted to offer some advice. I hope I've not offended you, as that was not my intent. I look forward to reading more from you (especially more of The Office ).

~Cat~

(Smiles and laughs, then applauds) Bravo!
Sorry it's taken me a while to chip in on this, but I had a busy weekend (engineering homework and whatnot...) Anyway, I just wanted to tell you, "Well done!" When I made the challenge, I envisioned something both heartwarming and funny, and that's just what you came up with. Glad to hear you had fun with this - I'm really looking forward to whatever you're coming out with next.

(Smiles and laughs, then applauds) Bravo!
Sorry it's taken me a while to chip in on this, but I had a busy weekend (engineering homework and whatnot...) Anyway, I just wanted to tell you, "Well done!" When I made the challenge, I envisioned something both heartwarming and funny, and that's just what you came up with. Glad to hear you had fun with this - I'm really looking forward to whatever you're coming out with next.

It was really cute. Nice job at this. Very good job. Very fluffy too. Loved it.

sweet story. it was interesting to read what you depict as the friend's reaction which was pretty well in character. good job!

awwwww that was a cute story lol wish someone would do that for me lol

This was a really cute plot idea, really fluffy fic. The only thing I was wondering is how did Ernie, Hannah, and Luna get into the Gryffindor common room? Other than that, it was a good story, keep up the good work!

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