IT was really really good to by the way> Keep writIng!!!!!!!!!

ok.........this is different usually the Lily/James stories that i read its usually that James is open about it and he's forward about how he feels with Lily and isn't stumbling over himself. This is a really good one it's funny , but it's different than what i usually read, so it took me a while to get used to what it was saying and how he was acting, but it was good nontheless. Keep Writing!!!!!!!!!!!!! :thumbsup:

oh i'm loving your crack cracks. hahaha get it? cracks, as in jokes? jokes about crack? crack cracks! ahahahahaha! but seriously, they\'re cracking me up.

quite quite brilliant.
i must congratulate you.

well done!

and they are truly most heartfelt congratulations.

That was bloody hilarious. I loved how you blatantly contradicted yourself. And hated the vegetable alliterations. (She loved them, really) And that was my poor attempt at contradicting myself. Lovely piece of work.

ok, i HAVE read this story & commented and all, but i'm commenting this time about 'the diary'! ITS GONE!!! AHHHH please bring it back/update but yes, it somehow dissapeared. thats not good. ok... read you lateR?

hhahahhahh ahhahahah 'with the passion and heat of a thousand suns' is definitly my FAVORITE line. my friend just told me that her mirror is giving her wierd looks, and my mom just lit a bag of popcorn on fire and my room is filled with smoke.
the funny thing is, i'm not joking. great fanfic, btw.

THATS IT!!!!!!!!!! WHAT!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE IT!!!!! MUST READ YOUR OTHER STORIES!!!!!

OMG THAT IS SOOOO FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!
LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL YOU ARE SUCH A FUNNY WRITER!!!
LOL LOL

*dies of laughter* That was fantastic! Loved it! It made no sense, while making perfect sense. Good job. I wish I had something criticizing to say, but I can't think. Loved it!!

The word “Ouchies.” just goes and shows you how wondeful this chapter is. Absolutely hilarious!

tha was beautiful! i really liked it. cannot wait for the next one.

Hilarious! I feel like that's all I've been saying for this fic, but really, it's just that funny. Marjorie and the occupants of the Great Hall and the numerous names for James' family jewels lol Great stuff.

This is great! Or maybe I should say that was great since it has finished except for the epilogue.

I love the whole voice over's imput having being written into the story. I have seen every episode so the voice is firmly cemented in my mind.

James and Lily were very cute in their insanity. And if you decide to do a sequel you should have one to do with cabbage. Like 'Cabbage compassion' or something, cause cabbage is such a funny yet understated vegetable.

that was lovely. i really liked it. lol. it was funny and cute.