This was boring. There was no real ending, and it was very OOC. And your attitude is bad too. I do like your writing style, though.

awwwwww. that is so sad. poor hermione. good job though!

I know everyone is telling you this and it probably will not happen but, you REALLY should add another chapter! But regardless, great story, I love your style of writing.

That was fantastic and very realistic. It's really well written, and I know how easy it is to think that a guy won't want you because of some sort of imperfection.
Harry wouldn't let that scar get between him and a woman he loved and who's been there for him for so long, though.
I really wish there was a sequel or second chapter in which Harry proved Hermione's thoughts wrong - something had to happen after this situation, after all, and what if it involved Harry figuring out what Hermione was thinking, and proving her wrong?
Please consider writing a sequel! I really want to read it, and I've seen that many others do as well.
This was a fantastic story, though.
-Michelle

Huh? That's it? I'm not even referring to the abruptly ended masturbation - which felt real enough - but the whole story. I don't need every story to end in resolution, but this was very abrupt, and it lacked enough development to be OVER.

Take down that "completed" notice, and double the length of this story! ... please?

I am going to assume that won't happen, so I'll just add that there is something unique about the way you write, and I enjoy it. I especially like how easy it is to relate with how Hermione feels here.

please right somemore...this isnt much of a story...if you want us to give you something to write for write somethingn long enough worth writing to you for

WHAT? Harry needs to kiss it and make it better--not physically, of course, but psychologically. There's no way he would let a scar get between him and the right woman--especially when it's a scar she got fighting beside him. Part of what makes Harmony such a good idea is that they have always fought together, and the scar would be a symbol of that.

And Hermione understands Harry well enough to know that one thing Harry would NEVER do is let that scar stop him from loving her, physically or otherwise.

Well, I don't know....I guess this story is one that is better. I didn't really relaize that there was much of a change, so I pretty much skimmed it. I am sorry that there were some really negative revies, I would just ignore them and keep writing.

What you have done was something different and some people don't like the differences. I have to say, as much as I hated the short chapters. it was really good with the disconnection. Well, whatever.

HOpe you finish the story and if not, I am looking foward to reading more of your other ones.

So much anger... I don't believe you actually ARE over it. Unless you're trying to be sarcastic, in which case it wasn't really funny. You're sad, man.

It's just a bit sad but I think it is well-written.. reflects OotP events from Hermione's perspective. Good job!

Hey, it never hurts to try something new! I wasn't the biggest fan of the story either, but I can see where you were trying to go with it. I think it was well written, even if I wasn't a fan of the storyline. I look forward to reading your other stories.

Like I said the first time, I thought the short chapters were what really added power to the story- it helped with the mood you were setting for the story. I skimmed the story again, didn't really see any changes to the text, so I stick by my original review, but I just wanted to tell ya that there are those of us who liked it the original way.

Wow. You just lost a reader with your attitude. I won't be reading any of your future stories, and it's a pity, really, cuz I thought that Silent Surprises was an alright story. I do realize that you were upset due to all the negative feedback, but that doesn't give you permission to be as snotty as you were in your notes here (sorry but that's how it came across to me), and in your reply to one of the reviews on the other version.

You could have/should have simply ignored that reviewer, and if you had *truly* done the story as you wanted, then you should have just left it (after all it is YOUR story, and no one else's, so really what *you* think is all that matters). People were still reading it as it was, they were just letting you know that that style just doesn't go over well -which I have to agree with. As a reader, it's annoying to have to go through so many chapters, for so little words and plot. Especially when those reviewers were correct about getting the same point across even all posted togther.

As an author myself (in other fandoms) I can't condone your apparent attitude towards the negative feedback (we all get it -*I* certainly have. doesn't mean we have to react that way about it. you could have simply edited the first chapter to say something about not bothering to comment on the shortness of the chapters, that you know, you like em, and that's how they're meant to be. *shrugs* Nuff said.). Feel free to just ignore this review, as I mentioned above. Good luck with your future fics though, I do wish you all the best! -but I definitely won't be reading them.

~Cat~

I liked the first version better that this one. I honestly did! And I only read that one yesterday! Can't wait for silent suprise!---Tiger111991

o no ! everyone who hated it suck! oh well hopefull you'll change your mind and think of a new chapter to this.... cant wait till you update silent suprises.. good luck and anyonewho hated it are just stupid people who cant appreciate things that are different and see beyond!