i like this story a lot. i was a bit surprised that i did, honestly. as soon as i started to read it, i fell in love with it.

I like to see where this one goes, it's a really interesting story, Hermione with no career!!!!



PapaMidNite

May I just say that you're an evil person for leaving the story like this?

To be honest, Hermione confuses me in this story; she's a strong, independant woman. I can't really see her becoming a battered house-wife.

Unless, of course, Harry's departure buggered her head up a bit. That could do it... Still, loving it so far, can't wait to read the next part.

I am quite enjoying the story. You are such a great writer.

i really love your stories. I've read all of them. i hope you update quicker and i can't wait to read them.

Oooh, this is a very good story, and this story may help those who are suffering this same senerio. Way to go!! Can't wait for the next chapter, and hopefully it isn't a long wait! Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!!

i love reading this story. you should write more and please be more quicker with the update and i can't wait

i love your story. where did you get you story from?
you have a very good imagination. are you also going to finsih the others. be quicker with the carribean crusing and this one please.

I'm sitting here like half laughing/crying. this was simply amazing. Hatred and Love. And ron is a drunken something. wow i have to hand it to you. i absolutely love this story.

I just started reading this story and think its fabulous

Please keep writing
and since our current skills will be better i bet the next chapter is gonna be bettter then this one

this was a really good chapter! and i like where you're going with the story! please update soon!

I look forward to seeing where you go with this story. It's on my updates list now .

omg love this story i really do hope you update another chapter soon....i its really good keep up the good work

Wow, that's quite a chapter as we see what Ron's become and what's happened with Hermione. I can see how she became a housewitch, someone has to show some care and who could abandon Gabriella to the "tender mercies" her father seems to have developed. I wonder if Hermione's crying in her pillow after Harry left was what drove Ron to drink or if that was a weakness he already had? In any case, I suspect things are going to get somewhat nastier for a while before they get better.

Sometimes unusual methods are necessary to tell part of a story, this is one time. The flashbacks quite eloquently and poignantly show just where both went wrong when they both felt so much for each other. Her reaction at the end speaks loads for her real feelings and cares and how they move on from there can't help but be "interesting" for all concerned. I admit, this reader's main concern, outside of the two main protagonists, is Gabrielle and how she'll take it; I'm ashamed to admit that, from the few glimpses you've given us, I really can't care that much about this Ron, save in his ability to do damage and hurt.