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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/07
awwwwwww.................. --cry cry--..........
sweet.. sad.. but a sense of happiness beneath the greif.. the love.. --gosh, im sounding like a poet person here-- well.. it was amazing, all i can say.. keep it up.. never give up.. --haha, i rimed, wait, no, that was just " up and up" not a rime, just the same words-- it was terrific.. wonderful.. magnifico.. --Props to dragonrider--
 

Rosali
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/01/07
Touching, very touching even though it doesn't completely grasp the full potential of the situation at hand.

Cheers,

Rosali
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review. Yours is the type I like - the ones that they make me think and will ultimately help me improve as a writer. If you have a chance, could you expand a little on your comment? I'm considering redoing/expanding this story.

Thanks,
Dragonrider
 

Dune Scribe
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
Hey this was an awesome sort story. I really liked it. My only critique would be that the ending kind of dropped off. Maybe it would have been better to have Luna and Ron talking again at the end. I don't know maybe I'm worng. But still I really like this. Keep it up
 

happy_daze
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
Interesting. Very sad, too, of course. I both enjoy and secretly hate that you leave out whether Harry and Hermione are REALLY alive or not. It leaves it open to our interpretation but also leaves us hanging =( But at least they're happy =)
 

CathyD
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
Aww, beautiful ending. I love that last paragraph, but most especially the last sentence. It just gets me. Great job! This was really an enjoyable fic.

~Cat
 

Amazing Sorceress
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
Aww... that was so sad, but I still loved it. Update soon, I wanna know what happened to Harry and Hermione.
 

VacantSkies
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
Hey, that story was a treat for me this afternoon. Good job! I really liked the way that you described things and the actual story itself was very nice.
 

pstibbons
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
Urk. Is this a one-shot? Are H&H dead, or have they materialized somewhere else in the world as Muggles?
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
I liked this...it was bittersweet. I am confused though it seems like it would be a oneshot but it does say in progress...a mistake perhaps or should we expect more? Thanks.
Author Feedback: Sorry. It was my mistake - forgot to mark it as a one-shot. However, I am considering expanding on it.
 

lorel
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
That was very nice in a sad sweet sort of way. Never really get to see Ron's perspective on these kinds of things. Great job.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/01/07
A nice story. Well done. I liked the descriptions of Harry's and Hermione's love. Maybe it was me, but I didn't get what happened to them.
 

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