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soooo sad! I liked it cause it seem very real. Really good job! |
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There are times that a story just reaches you with its beauty. For me this is one of those times. My Favorite line from this story " It is simple now, and in that simplicity, there is a beautiful peace." I just love the beauty of that line. It sums up beautifully the love they both feel for each other. I'm awed. This was a lovely story. Well done!  |
Author Feedback: Aww, thank you. What a wonderful review to receive. I know the kind of stories you're talking about, and I'm excessively flattered that you think mine is among them. |
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fledgeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
Beautifully written as always, and somehow the smut isn't even real smut, it's a lot more. I'm still wondering, though, what on earth madfe Hermione marry Ron in the first place. Can JKR's folly have been sightly contagious? |
Author Feedback: Well, if we're to follow "canon" and characterize Hermione canonically, she has to be a bit of an idiot, hasn't she? 
And thank you. ^^ |
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That was a great story. Although, it's disappointing for Ron to be hurting Hermione like that, I'm glad harry comforted her, and made her see the truth.
Brilliant work as usual, can't wait for more. Keep it up, and take care, Ash. |
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Nah, I want see Ron suffer, do you hear, suffer! Suffer, Suffer, SUFFER! I want to see that sucker-punched-in-the-gut look on his face when he realizes he's lost Hermione to Harry. I wanna see him get all red-faced and snarky, only to have Harry cut him off at the knees when he tries to get shirty with Hermione. I wanna see Molly take Hermione's side for a change and give Ron holy hell for being a worthless excuse for a husband! Revenge, to you hear, REVENGE!
a-hem.
Nice story, though. Hopefully there are no kids yet to complicate matters. Now it's back to the Regency, right? |
Author Feedback: *laugh* Oh, but I'm too lazy to bother with Ron. He's so very dull and predictable.
Nope, no kids. My Hermione is a bit like me in that she has little to no maternal instincts, and certainly wouldn't pop one out for the likes of Ron.
And, yes, it's back to the Regency. I couldn't abandon it. ^^ |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
THIS FIC IS THE MOST ROTTEN ONE OF YOURS... YOU SUCK BUDDY...  |
Author Feedback: o.0 I should like to know why you felt this way. |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
Nice to see Harry standing up for his own happiness! Rather like Lemonade chapter two...  |
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Great and very well written one-shot!  It's sad though that it will end there and not get a few more chapters... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
Wow. A lovely read, definitely up to your usual superlative standard. I particularly love this bit, "... I was always comparing them to you, and they never measured up. I know now that you’re the one I want, that I’ve always wanted." More please ... |
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This was INCREDIBLE! Do u have ANY idea how amazing this piece of writing is? I wish it was mine. It's... beautiful and sad... and...everything. Words can't describe how truly wonderful this piece of writing is. And i'm not going to cheapen it by using those little emoticons on the side. Not many fics could live up to this standard. You should be very, VERY proud. Congrats.
~LK1512~ |
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mannequinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
Ooo interesting. It's such a shame when I read fics like this, Hermione in an unhappy marriage with Ron, sneaking off with Harry.
Poor darlings, if only they had seen what was in front of them sooner! |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
LOL sorry R/HR not R/H! Please forgive my mistake.
By the way, please advise some more stories which contained the plot I had mentioned, SHE coming to HIM. |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
Romantic and dramatic. Although THEIR affair was not a decent thing, I still liked it. I've always liked stories SHE coming to HIM not HE coming to HER. Well done!
Do hope R/H read this story! LOL |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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