Interesting but sad end to the story. I'm glad John got some time with Harry. I hope Ron and Luna get married and give him some siblings. I'm also glad Molly reconciled with them in the end, even if she had been a selfish b*tch before, she's family.

I hope you do either a sequel, to find out how John does in Hogwarts, and a part where Ron and Luna get married and adopts John. That would be a special story. Keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!!

omg, that was so hard to read, I just lost my mom last month, and i was with her when she died. even though this story is fictional it was still so hard to read, it brought back that night so vividly

I would have put the "I posted 3 chapters today" note at the top of THIS chapter, so people see it...

Good story, but the ending was a bit abrupt.

That's a good wrap-up, there and a sound one. I rather suspect that Mrs. Weaseley took a lot of thinking, and probably some "pointed input" from her other children before coming around, but, most importantly, she did while she could still make amends. I suspect relationships will still be rather strained for a while, but they do have a chance to heal, now. *smile* I also suspect that we may see Ron & Luna becoming a couple, too.

Very short, but, again, very poignant and very succinct. You don't waste a lot of space on unncesssary description, narrative, or conversation; I rather like that in a writer.

Aww, that's a poignant scene, but so typically "Harry", not dying with any great fanfare, but quietly while sitting with his son. The way things worked out was sad, but still triumphant and I do believe Harry left his son a far richer inheritance than he realized. In turn, his son filled a void he needed resolved.

Oh, this is a sad story, but it is a good story as well. Poor Harry!! Poor John. Hope that the next chapter won't take too long, so I will say this, keep up the good work, and as always...God Bless!!

You know we can't flame you if you don't update the story! It's a good story, hope you finish it.

Hey! The only thing good I can say about thoes last chapters were that if Harry dies, at least he will be back with Hermione again. Ron and Luna will be awesome parents Im sure. Until the next one, Byes

please don't tell me that you are going to kill Harry. That would be so unfair to poor little John. I mean, please please don't kill Harry. He has a good reason to live now, John needs him.

humph go and kill off harry, well since you already killed off hermione i guess it only works, post soon!

Well, Ron is right. What Harry did is 5 BILLION times worse than just dying on them, something that Ron and Hermione would probably have preferred that he did.

Though, why would Harry be dieing since he killed Voldemort? That doesn't make a lot of sense, unless there is a backstory to it that you are going to reveal.

A good new chapter, but they are a little too short for my taste.

this will sound odd, but im glad hes dying. i would hate to think that harry just left hermione and the rest of the world and abandoned them for no good reason.

Hmm, quite the wrap-up to the trial and I rather imagine Molly was more than a bit taken aback. Harry's admission had to have been rather difficult for him, but it's good that he made it. Now at least his friends can find reason to celebrate with him and, hopefully, he'll die loved among friends rather th an alone somewhere, that's a goodness.