This is my all time favourite story.I love all the details you put in and how herm and victor talked i could see that in real life.You write wonderfully.  |
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That was really really beautiful!
I love what you've done with Viktor's character, and Harry is wonderful.
I really enjoyed this story, and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
-Michelle |
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Great one-shot. The writting and story were well thought out. Chartacters also seemed "cannonish", which is always a welcomed bonus!  |
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I'm glad this is on Portkey again. I love this story! I'm not a big fan of Viktor, but you wrote his character well. I liked the part where Harry pointed out to Hermione that he wasn't her brother! |
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Lyndie578Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/07
It was interesting how you used Viktor as the means to get them together. I loved how protective Harry was of Hermione; it showed that he really cared about her. It was very brave of Viktor (and Hermione) to reveal how Hermione really felt about Harry. I enjoyed this jaunt. Thanks for sharing! |
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Awww, so sweet. Loved this story, it was realyl cute!! Keep up the good work in your writing!
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/07
wow - that was very nicely done. The ending moments between Harry and Hermione were beautiful. Nice job! |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/07
Great little one shot. Really hit the spot on this dreary morning. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing. |
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rasadamSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/07
I liked the idea, but the fact that Victor speaks broken english and barely talks in the first, I don't know... I have a hard time trying to visualise this fic. Also, I thought the scene between Harry / Hermoine (Talking) was just way too short. The majority of dialogue is between Viktor/Hermione, I thought you might have stretched their realisation a bit or perhaps add some angst to make it interesting before the eventual sex.
Sorry if this sounds bad (Not intended, I still enjoyed reading it), just trying to be constructive. |
Author Feedback: It didn't sound bad, thank you for the review. Since my time is sometimes limited, I tend to write one-shots and I love writing H/Hr sex, so there often isn't enough time for talking! I understand what you mean, though. I like angst, but only a bit of it. Sorry you didn't like Viktor, I used the GOF movie Viktor as my visualization and that's just how I see him talking. Thanks! |
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Hi there
Excellent one-shot as always.I love all your writing and was very sad when you pull "Say the words" is by far my favorite. I love the way you portrayed the relationship between Harry and Herm with intensity and love. Can I ask a Question? Will you intend on repost "Say the Words" as well?
Take Care and continue to present us such wonderful work.
Ana |
Author Feedback: Thank you for your review. And yes, I plan to repost "Say the Words", that's one of my unfinished fics that I definitely plan to finish! Please stay tuned, I'll try to get it up soon! Thanks again. |
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nice one shot. it was sweet. really sweet. It was nice to read something with Viktor.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reviewing! I was inspired by the last little scene with Hermione and Viktor in the movie GOF. I just imagined that they continued to see each other but we all know she always been in love with Harry! |
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lovely lovely fic. what a great 'break' fic for me from packing.. great job. i loved it..
ramble on
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Author Feedback: So glad you liked it! I love to write one-shots cause they're quick reads when you need that little pick-me-up, especially H/Hr love! Thanks for reviewing! |
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