AMAZING!!! that was...no words, let me tell you, you're a GREAT writer.
Malu D.

Greatest H/Hr, i have ever read !
Vivid descriptions ! Oh ! ..

I loved this story. Harry was so sweet asnd considerate with Hermione. The wedding night was perfect, loving and passionate.
What I missed to make this story perfect was a little backround information. How old are Harry and Hermione in this story? How did they finally get together? And maybe a little about Harry's previous experiences. You make it clear that it wasn't the first time for him like it was for her, but you don't say if he had only affairs in the past or if there has been a serious relationship before Hermione. It would be nice to know these things, it helps to relate with the charcters. Anyways: Great story!

Awwww! How touching! Smuffy romance is the best way to go! ...don't ever stop doing it.

Hey great story I loved it, you should make on of Harrys pov.

that was a great story ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

harry and hermione forever ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's so cliched! And they talk a lot... And say "oh" a lot.
But it's good.. just cliched and.. a bit repeated.
7.5-8/10

That was an amzing story. It had a lot more than most stories of this kind. Great job.

Whoo.... It been one of most best story for R that I been seen it! If there have a movie like this. Oh boy, many people will watch it all day. LOL! Wait a minute... Isn't it will be next Chapter 2? You're a damn good writer for R.

this was just amazing, the lust, the antisipation,the raw emotions,the absolute climax.

Great story. I really liked it. I love how Hermione was so nervous.

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great job ! really fun and easy to read. I really liked that.
Im going to check out your others stuff
see ya

Yay...it's back up! I better save this before you change your mind Putting up naughy girl? Pretty please!!

Again another amaizing one-shot, sweet, carring, lovely, you really know how to put all the emotions at play, Excelent, good work.