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EmotionlessNightmare
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/07
Exellent start, you have amazing grammar for the most part, though the chapter could be longer!! haha.. I really like it.. Please update soon!!
 

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destroyerdrt
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/07
Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
 

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Hermiones Phoenix
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/07
I added you to my chapter alerts. Can't wait to see where this goes.
 

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Hermiones Phoenix
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/07
Loosely based on a book by Meg Cabot? The 1-800 books perhaps? And surprisngly those are the only Meg Cabot books I haven't read... Oh and the size 12 and 14 ones because I can't stand reading more books about how a girl thinks she's too fat blah blah blah blah...
Author Feedback: yeah that is where this is kind of from... they are really good i absolutely loved all five of them! I really reccommend them and thanks for reviewing!
 

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Lady Chancellor
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/01/07
This looks like a winner to me! Great storyline.
First time I have read about Ron being in trouble and Harry and Hermione trying to help him. Very creative and interesting first page. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Lady Chancellor
 

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Cokieisme
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
Ok, I'm interested. Will wait for next chapter. I do want to know, which Meg Cabot book is this loosely based on? I love Meg Cabot.
Author Feedback: the fifth book in the 1-800-where are you series, it just came out, its called missing. it's actually based off some book by another author so i don't know its still really good though i'd recommend the whole series and thanks for reviewing i will update soon!!

Azusena
 

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Lea
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
So far it was great but I think it will be a whole lot better once Harry and Hermione start to show there feelings more.
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
Great start. I really like it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
 

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yuke15
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
This is really very good so far, I hope you update regularly at the very least.
 

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Hermione G. Potter
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
ooh! i really want to read more, i liked how you had harry say hermione still had problems haha that was quite intriuging..update soon please
 

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Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
This is an interesting start, I have to say I'm hooked and look forward to reading more. Keep it coming!

~Cat
 

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i found nemo
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
ahh short chapter!
interesting start though, i'm very intrigued in the least. i hope you get the next chapter up soon!
 

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happy_daze
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
It's a good beginning. It definitely has my interest piqued, so I'm quite excited to read the next part
 

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pstibbons
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Ginny and Ron didnt try to persuade Hermione to reconcile with pratty Harry? As in turning up on her doorstep and...

Presumably you'll soon explain the "messed up when they found her" bit.
 

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sad2bsony
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Hmmm.. it's really a good start and I hope to hear a little of Harry's POV's too.
 

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