jpetselSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/08/08
Sweet and the perfect length. Continue the good work. I will continue to read your other stories. |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. It is most kind of you. |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/08
Beautiful story. I really enjoyed it. I especially liked the ending. That's just hwo it is, you know? Great work.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review I wasn't sure about this piece when I first posted it but now I rather like. |
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That was such a beautiful ending!
I didn't quite understand what had been happening between Harry and Hermione from the time of Voldemort's defeat until the present. Had they not seen each other at all since he said goodbye to her? Because she seemed so surprised at him appearing on her doorstep, as though she hadn't seen him all that time.
But it was beautiful and breathtaking, nevertheless. It's so nice so see that Harry's figured that he can live a normal like with Hermione now.
I loved this story, and it was very well written!
-Michelle |
Author Feedback: Harry and Hermione had not been in touch during that time. Harry had devoted himself to the capture and prosecution of all the Death Eaters who escaped. In the more extended version those DEs that Harry had personal reasons to see locked away had gone free and he didn't want to run the risk of bringing any threats abck to the people he loved.
I've actuall y considered making it a full blown fic but no inspiration has struck me yet.
As always it's great to get your take on my work. Thanks for reading! |
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That was a great one shot. Harry finally gets to enjoy the life he was given, and Hermione gets harry back. I loved it.
I really enjoyed this, it was fluffy enough for my liking, keep up the brilliant work.
Take care, and continue on with excellence, Ash. |
Author Feedback: Thanks so much I really appreciate the sentiment. |
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I adore all your stories!
I read them all twice, to be sincere. Whan I am reading them I always think that you write... well, the words you use, the sentiment you put in them, the fact that you always work with psychology, with feelings and relationships.
I hope to read the next chapter of 'What I Always Wanted' really soon!
In a not so happy tone, you should watch out for punctuation, because I found some mistakes, mainly commas. Just revise them when you can, because sometimes their missing confuse me (not in this story, but specially the others).
Until next time, good luck,
Sakura_txell |
Author Feedback: Thanks for your kind words and for the criticism as well. I really am horrible with commas.  |
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SchokkiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/01/07
Wow, nice! A very nice work indeed!^^ Thanks for sharing this lovely fic with us! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading and reviewing! |
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As always Searcy, you deliver something so wonderful and filling it doesn't stop to make my jaw drop. I was a little tentative to read this with the title, but of course i knew you wouldn't let me down! A little short for my taste, but overall up to your amazing usual standards. I can't wait for another fic by you!  |
Author Feedback: Your praise is far too kind but very much appreciated all the same. Sorry I frightened so many with the title but I was all metaphoric and melodramatic at the time...  . |
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Mage_13Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Oh, so sweet!!
I loved it... It's short, but it pictures what realy matters perfectly: Harry and Hermione's love..
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Keep it up!! I'm looking forward to see some more of your fics!! |
Author Feedback: YAY!!!! |
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Almost did not read this one. I blamed the title for my hesitancy. Now, I'm so glad I clicked on the title. This story is just wonderful! That last sentence - I just melted. Please keep up the good work (especially that update for Always Wanted)! |
Author Feedback: I'm working on that update right now I just needed to venture from it for a bit to get back on track. I know that sounds a bit odd but it seems to be working so what can I say! |
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gingercatUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Boy, that title scared me away....I DON'T read anything where Harry dies. I read the reviews(because I like your stories) and I am glad I did. I hope you will carry on. Harry needs to be Just Harry. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you read the reviews as well!! |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Nononononoooo! It can't be a one shot, it can't be! I want so much more!  |
Author Feedback: I'll think about writing more for this one but right now I'm focusing on "Always Wanted".  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Interesting chapter well written. A very good beginning I am hooked keep writing want to know what happens next. |
Author Feedback: I'd intended this to be a one shot but perhaps after I've finished up "Always Wanted" I'll think about making it a full story. |
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Very clever title...at least if it's over and Harry does indeed live... I took the title as, Harry the Hero is now "dead", allowing for Harry-just Harry- to live his life. Am I correct? :-) |
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sannihunSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
Love the beginning of this, one question though, one I'm sure you've already gotten: why the title? cuz you just can't kill Harry off. Is it Ron, please don't let it be Ron! |
Author Feedback: No one will be dying in this one the title is refering to the death of Harry's inner hero. No actual heros were harmed in the writing of this one shot.  |
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TovaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
you scared me!! I almost thought that Harry was going to jump from the balcony. 
short but sweet story! |
Author Feedback: Not another jumper...  ...the title is merely metaphorical! |
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