That was really good, especially for fourty five minutes work, and I really enjoyed reading it. Once again, good job.

I was charmed by the story; the poetry was nice, I guess, but I'm not much into that sort of communication. As a romantic serenade, I'd say it worked but my taste in the genre lies more in the Rudyard Kipling or Arthur Sullivan or even Poe, where the emotion is carried by the meter as much as by the words.
I am still convinced that you are one of the better authors in the H/Hr field, however, and I shall continue to read your work.
Thanks, Old Chuck

Wonderful little fic. I enjoyed reading it, and it left me with a little smile (especially the last part where Sirius burned brighter ). The poem was lovely too. Great job!

~Cat

nice little one shot

did you write that poem if you did that was really good

i love all your other stories open your eyes.. is my favorite

keep up the good work

I cant wait for the graveyard chapter

Very nice, but Just wanted to ask one question.
ron and Ginny were kidnapped at Bill/fleur's wedding correct?
JUst how did H/Hr come to know that their emotions had been tampered with love potions?

Touching and eloquent little piece, thank you. Now I want to see more chapters of Open Your Eyes: ...

it was a nice one shot. i liked the poem. it was nice and practically summed up Harry and Hermione.

I loved it, seems like a good appetizer to whet the appetite. Hope it helped you clear/organize/relax whichever the case may be. Happy writing.