Pls bash repeatly the idiot loser scum whiner crybaby jelious bastard ron and the whore love potion user slut ginny more often
Have harry and hermione never forgive them and have them revel the truth world wide and have ron and ginny shunned forever |
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RobertkSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/03/07
I hadnt taken the time to read many of your stories, but after I took a peak at this one I dont think that will hold much longer.
I found your way of setting up this one-shot remarkably well done (Even though it has been done before). I plan on making time to read more of your writings soon.
Robertk
* Again, well done with the story. The poem was excellent and not too cliche--something that seems to be increasingly hard to find* |
Author Feedback: Ah yes it is very difficult to be completely original in fanfiction, but I try to avoid cliches when I can or when I should.
Haha yeah that was a nice littl five minute hodge podge but it does seem to weather the days alright.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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This fic was great! It had a perfect combination of sorrow and hope. Written to perfection... |
Author Feedback: Not quite perfection...but thank you for the kind words.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/02/07
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I liked it but too bad Ron & Ginny had to die! |
Author Feedback: Well I'm not a Ron fan, as you'll see in my stories. But, I do like Ginny enough that I didn't like writing her death in the story.
Thanks for the review,
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If that took you 45 minutes, I'd like to see what you could do with more time. That was sweet, cute, and just fluffy enough.
Harry writing poetry; I love it. It was well-written, and good to read. Keep up the brilliant work, and take care, Ash. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it, the story was a flash of inspiration. Perhaps some time I'll try something a little more abstract.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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A beautiful story, really. It is really sad, though, what happened to Ron and Ginny. They did no deserve such a cruel and violent death.
I love it when you portray Harry as a poet, trying to voice his own feelings in such a delicate way, and romantic, as well.
Good job, and I hope to read more stories like this one from you.
Congratulations,
Sakura_txell |
Author Feedback: I quite agree it was a very sad way to start the story. But, I can't really foresee Voldemort passing up the wedding as an opportunity for mayhem.
Harry the poet has a certain earnest quality about him, doesn't he? It doesn't seem hokey or cheesy as it could at any rate.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
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Yocum1219Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
That was very sweet. A moment of happiness in an otherwise horrible situation. The poetry was beautiful!! |
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gingercatUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
I always thought Harry had the words inside him, he just needed to get them out. Nice One shot. |
Author Feedback: Sometimes I wonder what it would actually take for canon Harry to see what is right in front of him. I hope this might have passed as satisfactory.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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Aww, this is so sweet, I love it!! The thought of Harry writing poetry is so romantic!! Keep up the good work!!
husker_fan_2006 |
Author Feedback: Yes, all he needed was the proper motivation.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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This was very sweet, and I wanted to review just to let you know how much I loved Harry's poem about Hermione. Beautiful! |
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Wow... I can't write poetry if my life depended on it... So I appreciate it when others take the time to do it. That was beautiful and that was the most wonderful declaration of love I've ever seen.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Rufus |
Author Feedback: Haha I'm glad you liked it, but I don't think it was that good.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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hermy415Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
squuue!!!! that was soo sweet. It actually made me cry. That is really sweet. And the poem is just.....beautiful. I didn't like the fact that Ginney and Ron were dead but all in all, I love the story! And to think, i like gazing at the starry night too..
I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!! |
Author Feedback: So do you think we'll get through book 7 without anyone we like dying? But, I'm glad you liked the story.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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thanks for this little fic - really lovely, just what i needed to start the morning! |
Author Feedback: I'm glad my writing served as a substitute for caffeine.
Thanks for the review,
Matt |
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