missmonetUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
like what her parents died or something far worse then her parents death. please please continue very soon great chapter |
Author Feedback: how can her parents die when they're the ones coming to tell her bad news? HOpefully i'll update soon! |
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Son of a....  how could you leave it there!!!! Did her parents die? I have a feeling, but I'm not sure...you've gotta update soon like tomorrow or something!! Keep up the good work!! |
Author Feedback: How could her parents die when they're the ones coming to tell her bad news? Anyways, hopefully I'll update soon! |
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If her parents are dead I swear I'll kill you! You can't do that to her! We need to have a chapter with Her dad threting to chop Harry into little tiny bits if he hurts his daughter! This chapter was great other wise, but if you don't update soon, I may have to hunt you down and force you to write! MAWHAHAHAHAHHAHA! Sorry, alittle hyper right now! Update soon! ---Tiger111991 |
Author Feedback: how can her parents be dead? They're the ones who have come to tell her bad news. And, erm, yeah, I don't think Mr. Granger will be chopping Harry up any time soon. XD |
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Author Feedback: thanks! i plan on it! |
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You know, too bad there's no way to write my expression right now. Smiley emoticons don't cut it...but I'll use it anyway...  Love this fic, can't wait for the next chapter!
Husker_fan_2006 |
Author Feedback: thank you so much! |
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Well I think its great that Hermione is taking charge and going to ask Harry to go to the dance with her. I wished I had her courage. Wouldn't it be great if Hogwarts really existed. I would never want to go home. anyways i putting your story on my favs cuz i think its going to be great. And of course Ron is sooo immature.   Keep Writing. |
Author Feedback: oh, thank you! i wish hogwarts existed, too... |
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Oh My! That is really good! I love the imagery I got with Hermione daydreaming LOL really nice touch and completely believable. Great job! I can't wait to read more. |
Author Feedback:  Thanks! More will be up soon hopefully! |
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oh!!!!! I like this a lot! this is my first fan fiction to read in a long time!!! I'm glad that I picked this one good job!!!!! update soon!!! please  great job |
Author Feedback: thank you! Hopefully i'll update soon
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 15/01/07
nice little story so far. looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon. |
Author Feedback: thank you! |
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I totally know how Hermione feels. Scary thing is that I've felt it for my best friend too. (But the difference in stories and real life, sometimes happy endings don't come around... |
Author Feedback: yeah, well...i feel your pain. this story is my story of my life this past week. Hang in there, it'll all work out! |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/07
An excellent start, you've got me hooked with it, and wanting more. I look forward to reading more, keep it coming!
~Cat |
Author Feedback: thank you! more will be up soon!
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/01/07
Talk about cliche. Listen: it sounds like you have a talent, but you need to work on creativity. Honestly, half of this story is bollocks. They wouldn't have a dance for no reason- the Yule Ball was cool, wasn't it? But that's because it was a tradition of another big thing. Make it more creative, and if you NEED this dance, then either take them out of Hogwarts and in college or something or make it a part of something HUGE. And, if this was a parody, then dances would be okay. |
Author Feedback: My, you're quite the cynic! If you know how it should be, become an author and write it yourself. NOt to be rude or anything, but, seriously... |
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Good start! I can't wait to read more, especially the part where Harry asks Hermione to be his date. At least, I hope he asks her instead of the trio just going together. I hope you post more quickly!!! |
Author Feedback: we;ll just have to wait and see! |
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awwwwww poor hermione y do guys have to be so clueless!! lol i like this story cant wait till next chapter |
Author Feedback: don't know, i'm trying to figure that out for myself! HOpefully an up[date will be soon! |
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I like this story so far. I hope Harry ends up going with Hermione, or they at least get together that night or something.
I hope you update the next installment soon.
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Author Feedback: Thanks! Update will be soon! |
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