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Long Slow Beautiful Dance

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BeautifulLie
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 20/01/07
ahhh no. a little mean to leave us all hanging like that! Ron was rather sweet about everything, which I liked [:
+ awwwh talk about cute with the wizards chess scene
update soon!
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Harryluver05
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 19/01/07
OH MY GOD !! GOD MY OH !!! i want to know what happened to Hermione !!! i wanted Harry to say yes ... ERGG !!! UPDATE SOON !!! PLEASE !!! PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE !!!
-- Harryluver05
 

tobydog
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/07
Well written -- good start! The only thing that seemed off to me was Ron asking about Harry in a suit, and McGonagall telling the boys to wear nice clothes and ties. Doesn't seem 'wizard-y' enough, since they all definitely wore dress robes to the 4th year ball.
 

tobydog
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/01/07
Well written -- good start! The only thing that seemed off to me was Ron asking about Harry in a suit, and McGonagall telling the boys to wear nice clothes and ties. Doesn't seem 'wizard-y' enough, since they all definitely wore dress robes to the 4th year ball.
 

Forestgirl12
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
ahhhh what's is going to happen? who is going to die? ahhhh! Great chapter loved it!
 

wizardchick292
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
Ok whats going on. I mean did something happen to Hermione's dad. I mean what. Please update soon. We the readers must know what happens next.
 

AnonymousJOnes
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
update update updat, you can't leave it such a BIG cliffie!!!!! ahhh update pleez!!!!!
 

PotterBandFreak
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
OMG! What happened! lol Wonderful story! I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope Hermione gets to go with Harry to the dance. Keep up the good work.
 

jorgieporgie116
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
ahh!!! A cliffy!!! Please update soon! I just love all your Harry/Hermione stories! UPDATE SOON!!!
 

Mossimo
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
I love this story! Update soon. I love how Ron isn't as blind as a bat when it comes to love!
 

starofrock21
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
ohhhhhhhhh noooooo omg nonononono plzz let it not be wat i think it is that would me so sad poor poor hermione but i love this story so i cant wait for next chapter to see wat happens
 

sex_kittin_mione
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/01/07
Ooh, I love the cliffhanger. My guess is that someone died and Hermione can't go to the dance cause she'll be gone. Or I could be completely wrong. Anway, great story.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
i love how people keep asking you in her parents died...considering they are telling her the bad news...i bet it was her granny granger who died...or another dear relative...
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
oh my god..what happened. someone died. i know it. muuch muchh luuuv! update sooN!
Author Feedback: you'll see soon
 

missmonet
Unsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 18/01/07
like what her parents died or something far worse then her parents death. please please continue very soon great chapter
Author Feedback: how can her parents die when they're the ones coming to tell her bad news? HOpefully i'll update soon!
 

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