well that was a complete troll of a fic you call there.

that was so sad

this story wasn't bad for a first try..but i won't say it was great! this is NOT a flame, but i think it could have been better...

it was well written, but too dark and depressing for my liking...

Wow, quite dramatic and sad story.... Very very sad. *tear tear* but good. Indeed good.

The idea for the story is very interesting and actually not a bad plot idea. The story was very rushed though and just kept jumping from death to death. You should add more detail next time and let the reader adjust to something so harsh as a main character dying before going to the next death. This is your first song fic though and its actaully not that bad for a first time. Just try to be more descriptive and not as rushed next time. I give you credit though for doing a pretty good job. Some of my first fics absolutely sucked, lol. Writing a story with a song it is is very hard as well and I've only just gotten the hang of it. I do hope you write more though! The more you write, the better you become! Keep up the nice work.
~PhoenixFirebolt~

Okay, VERY rushed. But you did say this was your first songfic. Just go slowly and be more in detail next time. Detail and perfection is what makes a story good. It was good for your first. You don't want to see me firsts...goodness.

whoh thats to tragic

Ok, I'm really sorry but that wasn't too good. It was too dramatic and the reactions on the parts of Harry and Hermione were too... fake. You can make it better by making it longer and more descriptive. I'm sorry again but I didn't like it too much.

Oh man! Why did they have to go and do that now? Dang. Nice angsty fic though.

Noooo!
This seems lkinda like you rushed from death to death, like you were just sort of in a hurry to end it. It went by much too quickly

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Heather

Holy moly, that's dark! I agree that it was a bit rushed, but I did like the Harry/Hermione parts.

It feels that you were rushing from scene to scene.

sad....., i had hp that you´d kill that voldie bastard..... that´s a tad dark either

Well it was a bit rushed mite have wanted to make this a ch. story and have the death a bit later .Also ,well my only sore thumb is thats it went too quick .But it was good ,it most certainly hade it's good points.