I like truly like this fic. It's probably one of the few rare good ones on this site for the past year and a half so far. You are writing something that over half the H&Hr shippers don't have the guts to write about.

awsome story I love it, but i definetly think its a bit more tha PG lol.. but I still love it a lot.. made me laugh

Hun?
This some thing i am just by this and Harry and Hermione realy shoud talk to Ron about this. what was going in Ron mine at that time any way?

oh yay! looks like a good start. nice writing. i liked it. keep it up!

I'm confused that was wonderful, but it says one shot, to me it doesn't seem like a one shot, but i suppose it could be and then it says in progress on the title page. If this is indeed finished please write some more i really enjoyed this and i want to read more!!!!!!!!

is that it!? Nooo. But, it was funny. lol. I had a good laugh sometimes, but then, it was... true.. you know? I read so many stories where Hermione was with ron first but they never discussed that. Thank goodness for Harry./ hehe. and he does have her now. nice work

It goes without saying (even if I'll say...) that one of the worst things that can happen in a relationship that is new as that is Harry & Hermione in your fic is talking about previous sexual partners. Specially when they are so absurdly close to those same people still. Some realionships wont survive it. As mature as I would like to think I am, I lost all the mood toward the fic after reading it. I know its stupid to think that teenagers will wait for true love before going at it, but most of the more loyal(or as some people want to say it, militant) H&Hr shippers wont feel good reading the aspects of Hermione having sex with Ron and discussing it with Harry (thats one of the main reasons most authors - at least here at PK - dont show it as directly as you did, that do kill the mood). Thats the thing. The writing in itself was good enough. See ya in another fic.

This was very well written; good dialogue, good grasp of the characters, and interesting plot. To be honest however, I'm not sure if I'll continue with it. I'm not sure I could handle reading about Ron and Hermione's sex life; especially if Hermione is that kinky. Good luck with it though, and please know that your efforts are appreciated.

I agree with the first reviewer. Ron should have been a Eunuch. It's a well written little story but considering the audience you are writing to I don't think a lot will like it.

I'm sorry but the thought of anyone having sex with ickle Ronnikins just gives me a case of the willies. Yech, good thing I wasn't eating at the moment.

I wonder where you will take this story next?

Thanks for writing,
Matt