what there is of this is great the writing is great the idea is great but it could have gone on quite a bit longer there i such range in this idea that stopping it as a one shot is doing your talent a disservice

Err.. no offense but I don't like Hermione at all in this story. She passes Harry's insecurities off like they're nothing and actually punishes him for it initially. If I was dating someone ( this has happend before) and they found out something like that from an ex, then I would get an earful. It's no myth that 60% of high school relationships bomb out because of what the couple will hear from other people about each other.

I think you should make a sequel where Hermione finds out some things she didn't want to from Ginny so she can understand things from Harry's point of view. I bet the last thing she'll want to do is sit down with Harry and Ginny and "discuss" it...

Well, good story but it seemed like it ended before they could actually resolve what started Harry's resentment in the first place.

ha ha... wow that'd be awkward.. "hey ron, wanna come ver to help explain your sexapades with Hermione?" you're a good author.

keep it up
-megz

lol lol lol! that's great! i love the random humor...its actually a little nice to see harry get jealous about ron instead of the other way around! great work, i laughed so hard!

that was a really good one!
i liked it very much...
I love when Hermione gets really mad hehehe its such fun! and Harry gets all clumsy
i guess Im going to check out you other stuff
see ya

Interesting story but I would have liked to see Hermione take her wrath out on Ron!

Thats sweet at the end of the chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I think Ron is a jerk for bringing up having sex with Luna, when he very knows that Harry is with Hermione now and it's uncomfortable. I wish Harry and Hermione the best. Keep Writing.

I really liked this story. It's a well-written and convincing situation and it was fun to see Harry stumble with words saying exactly the wrong things in the wrong way and sending Hermione on her righteous rampage. Personally I think Harry had legitimate questions, he was feeling insecure of his relationship and a talk between the two of them about their past experiences was long overdue... In fact it's surprising that had not come up before, like, immediately when they got together? Harry just needed to express himself better! I was baffled by Hermione's suggestion to include Ron in such an intimate conversation--that was just wrong, and not Ron's business at all. Another 'off' moment was the conclusion: Harry goes from feeling hurt and uneasy, to simply not having a problem. Oh I liked it, it just seemed too sudden and easy. If Harry had issues with Ron and Hermione's past, I figure it would take more time and effort to get over them. Still, a very good read. Thanks!

Wow I loved this! I am new to this site, and this is the first one I actually like and enjoy!
I thought this was written extremely well, and kinky is just plain out funny when you write it! Loved it, sad to hear it's a one shot, but am now excited there's gonna be a sequal Woot!
I must read some of your other fics!

I really liked this story. I like it when writers deal with the pink elephant in the room in regards to the "Hermione has dated both boys" scenario. In real life when you have a close knit group of friends in-dating teds to happen and it leads more often to awkwardness then over wrought drama. I liked how you handled it.

Also I like the idea of Herms as a lil kink mistress...but that's just me.

I think the writing is good, but the plotline I don't like. Even the idea of Ron and Hermione having sex is like ... like ... bestiality (Ron as the animal). That is something my stomach can't stand.

Aw, Harry's insecurity and jealousy was actually quite endearing in this fic. Especially with his dejected line of "He had you first." But then the final line sealed everything. Great fic and interesting concept! It felt different and refreshing =)

Good fic. I really enjoyed reading it. I liked that it had some angst, but not too much. And of course the ending was really nice.

Keep 'em coming!

~Cat

this was a really good first chapter. I can not wait to see what's going to happen next.