this is an amazingly wonderful story it is extremely erotic i adore it your an wonderful author i hope you write more stories please do i would love to read more of your writing i like it that much!!!

huhuhuhuhuhu, Sub Night! Love the name, you know, sounds very good! Sub night, sub night!!
Well really good that it wasn't kinky, harry doens't seem to be depraved...he seems to be very romantic... well as far as hios honestity let him go. hauhauahuahau

I think Sub Night is a wonderful idea, as well ;-)
Great story, I absolutely loved it
I've never read anything quite like it before, and therefore, I conclude that you are a genius for coming up with it
I hope you write more like this!
-Michelle

I hope this is not a one-shot cause its brilliant!
good idea and very well written!

This was such a cute story and filled with the most adorable smutty scene!!! I just LOVE Harry and Hermione together!!! I wish you would keep going and not make this a one-shot...I want to know what Hermione does next month!!!

Remarkably sweet! I believe that best describes your fic. Very sweet and romantic. I loved it.

Read this over at LJ, just as hot here! Always love some H/Hr smut...their lovemaking is so loving, even when it's a bit kinky! Great job as always.

WOW. Just wow. Very nicely done. That was some truly well written smut.

oohh. When I read the title, I thought of a sub- sandwich. LOL. BOY WAS I WRONG! he he he. I really liked the once a month thing. Something for both Harry and Hermione to look forward to.

That was a really hot and sensual story! I hope that you'll gift us with a sequel detailing one of the nights when Hermione is in charge of pleasuring Harry!

Nice, sensual imagery. The story could have used supplementary senses though: perhaps more on the sibilant sound of flesh sliding on silk and satin, the aroma of dark chocolate and desire. Engage all the senses.
By the way, I absolutely agree that the imagination is the greatest sex organ. . .

That was HOT. Harry as the dominate is always worth the read. Excellent job

I really liked this fic. I also enjoyed your play of the submission part. It was classy, and did not degrade Harry or Hermione one bit. I would like to think that approaching their "relationship" in this fashion keeps them feeling a little more "cannonish", which I trully appreciate. The writting and story telling were excellent. A fantastic one-shot...really! Its going on my favorites list for sure!