I don't know if Harry is dead in this piece. I assume that he's actually alive, but totally broken. Broken by what happened, what he had to do, what went wrong, losing Ron.

But I love it how you conveyed it from Hermione. Hermione is my favorite character, and I think she would fall apart if anything like death happened to Harry. She'd be torn up about Ron but if Harry died, she'd be just a shell.

Thanks for posting a story again, it was rather short, but I do like seeing your posts. They're unique and angsty. I love angsty.

i really liked that, great shot short, but it still conveyed a lot of the emotion Hermioen was feeling. it was a really meaningful piece. great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

If nothing else this is a passionate piece.

Hurt, anger, sadness,loneliness.

It could be said to be a tale of someone completely lost. Nowhere to go back to. Nowhere to go forwards. Cannot move sideways.

I'm taking the meaning of Harry not being whole as figurative...unless he was blown up?

Kudos!

wow, that was poetic!!!...it's sad, really sad.. what happened? what are all thi dreams? why does she keep having these dreams? are her best friends still alive?.. oh my gosh.. i think i'm gonna break down...

I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!

wow, that was really harsh, I'm not really sure I understand, is there going to be more to help explain?

That was totally depressing. I can only assume that Harry is dead. Sorry...to DOWN for me.