Its incredibly cute
I love the straight forwardness of the two of them, and how he just opened the door knowing it was her, or I missed the line were she said “harry its Hermione”
great fun
I intend to read more of what you’ve written
ProngsHoof

That was a cute story. Harry and Hermione do depend on each other a lot, and I think you did a good interpretation of how they'd be without the other for a time.

Great work, continue with it, and take care, Ash.

Nice. Not exactly the ending I expected from the way the story began, but nice. I guess I was expecting a traumatized Harry and a rescuing Hermione.... So, he was hiding in his room and avoiding everyone... why? I can't imagine it was just because he missed Hermione, but nothing else is fleshed out to give us any clues. Still, enjoyable in itself.

wow... interesting story, I like the writing and the story, it's amazing
keep it up.
-megz-

lol i like the ending, what were the dreams he was having huh?

Hm, I liked it. It was a cute little one-shot. Loved the idea.

Wow i like it .. i also like the concept of aHermione being gone for the past year nice keep going i can't wait to read the next chaper..

This is sooo sweet. I love the one shot. Or is there more to the story. Anyways i'm putting it as my favorites. I love AU stories they are sooo awesome. Keep Writing.

Keep typing. I really enjoyed this, great job with the ending really enjoyed it!

A great one shot fic! You really conveyed the emotion and feelings between Harry and Hermione really well. I totaly enjoyed it, and I'm putting this one on my favorites list for sure...

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

haha, funny plotless fic!... well, not excatly funny, just the last part.. i was relieved both of them will wait... i'm against pre-marital sex!!!..hehe

I support h/hr!!!
Go Harmony!!!

I think your piece is sweet and lovely. I am glad you posted it. The image is detailed and clear. Great work.

Its sweet in a hormonal way.

I like how Hermione was worried at the start, as if doubting herself, Harry. Doubting everything. I mean you sometimes come across stories like this in where either Harry or Hermione have been away for a period of time and they usual have a variation of the phrase 'Everything remained the same' or the meaning is there. You explored the differences by pointing out a change here or there about one or both of them.

Because a year is a long time. 365 or 366 days. 52.2 weeks. 12 months. Quiet often more things change than what stays the same.

Thanks for a dose of realism.
Kudos.

This is a really great idea, a good plot bunny, I would change a little bit myself, give it a little twist and turn it into a full story. I would have it where Hermione goes away for the 5th and 6th year and when she came of age she goes against her parents wishes and goes back to Hogwarts, where she finds the hollow shell of Harry Potter, like in this story, after Hermione left he realized he loved her and he wasn't able to survive Umbridge and the whole school acting the way they did around him in 5th year and then he lost Sirius in some redone version of the DoM and it totally crushed him, having lost both the people he loved the most and the Headmaster pretty much ignoring him that year, so he retreated into himself and barely did anything, he was barely passing, his OWLs were a joke and when Hermione comes back he doesn't even recognize him, she of course has realized she was in love with him and starts to try everything she can to get him become the Harry she once knew and she blames her parents and even goes so far as to yell at them and storm out saying she will come back for her stuff and never see them again. What do you think? Just an idea, but like I said, good one-shot.