pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/01/07
Yawn. Honestly, this fic is a little nauseating. Harry and Hermione are too rich, too good-to-be-true. It's all very soap operatic. There's no danger anywhere, it's all completely 90210 and therefore boring. Though I suppose it'll be enjoyable to 12 year olds. |
Author Feedback: Never seen 90210, but the point of this fic is to be larger then life too good-to-be-true. BUT I never made up the part about Harry being rich, its canon that he has a vault - basically a room, full of gold...so if a room full of gold doesn't equal a good thirty million then damn...what will? |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/01/07
Er.... that really brings up an obvious question. Why Michael and not Ralf? Everyone knows Ralf is a wizard and Michael's a squib and Ralf has to hold back to prevent suspicion?  |
Author Feedback: Michael Schumacher is magic, if he were to look at chuck norris and concentrate chuck norris would die along with all of his little fans  |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/01/07
Er.... that really brings up an obvious question. Why Michael and not Ralf? Everyone knows Ralf is a wizard and Michael's a squib and Ralf has to hold back to prevent suspicion? |
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Author Feedback: hehe okay okay, and the DBZ stuff will come in within a couple chapters. I must warn you right now though like everything else it is a concept that is being taken, so don't expect the normal DBZ universe to be followed very closely.
-War will be updated within a few hours btw.
Thanks a lot bro. |
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Keep typing. I can't wait until the next chapter. Will it have the massage in it!? THat'll be the best chapter yet (prolly) hands down!  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/01/07
Dude, the story rocks and all, but the rate at which you update plain SUCKS... SO what if you were working on another story? No offense mate but update soom..... |
Author Feedback: Fair enough. |
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ApacUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 24/01/07
This is a start to a very promising story. Great events, along with a plot full of twists and turns. Love the sly interactions between Emily Hermione and Harry. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/01/07
I really enjoy reading this story because it brings Harry and Hermione together in a fun, unique way. You did a really great job in making this story stand out from the rest. I can't wait to read more! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 23/01/07
Just read it all, love it and look forward to the next post. |
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That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 21/01/07
Dude, are you done having Writer's block????  . Mail me if you want some help... my email id is vcanusethisid@yahoo.co.in..... Mail me buddy..... See ya |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 21/01/07
EARTH CALLING DRAGONIS..... EARTH CALLING DRAGONIS... WHERE ARE YOU???  . Please update soon.... There are people here getting sick of waiting for an update... Don't amke this fic a replica of Assasin..... |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 20/01/07
Keep the work up dude .... Please update soon.... No offense buddy but don't leve it like you did with assasin.... Story rocks but thats the only thing I've gotta say about  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/01/07
keep the chapters coning! i think its pretty good. ddd yes. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/01/07
keep the chapters coning! i think its pretty good. ddd yes. |
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