Hmm...interesting story plot [actually it's a pretty common plot], but...well, I'm going to be honest. The writing isn't good. You've completely switched the HP characters around. And what's up with Americans and our paranoia of "terrorist attacks"? That was totally random and unnecessary. Better luck next time, dude. *2 thumbs down*

Hello, just so that you know, Hermione is older than Harry. By a couple of months, at least. And by the by nobody is perfect. Some problems add reality. But hey, it\'s nice to dream.

story is really good. i want to keep on reading this. update on this story soon i'm hook to this story. you have a talent for this i like your other story as well but i really want to keep reading this story. keep up the good work.

hey great story i like that your going for a harry potter and dragonball z mix story. hope you update this story soon it's really good bro.

For the nexx chapter it should be devoted to the massage, where Harry is brought the the brink of insanity, call it the deadliest massage or something.

can you please kill yourselves?? or do you want me to help you?

GREAT PROGRESS ON ASSASIN EH??? PUTTING A FIC ON "PAUSE" FROM "IN-PROGRESS" IS NOT A VERY GREAT ACHIEVEMENT BY THE WAY MR.DRAGONIS........ IF ONLY YOU DIDN'T SUFFER FROM THIS "ABNORMAL"(ahem) VARIATION OF WRITER'S BLOCK YOU COULD HAVE BEEN A GOOD AUTHOR.... SO IN SIMPLER WORDS, YOUR FICS SUCK BECAUSE OF THE GRAND UPDATE RATE..... I'LL TELL YOU SOMETHING.... NEVER (I MEAN NEVER) START A STORY JUST BECAUSE YOU DREAMT SOMETHING UP AND YOU THINK THE STORYLINE SOUNDS LIKE "FUN"..... NEVER (I MEAN NEVER (AGAIN)) START A FIC UNLESS YOU HAVE PRE-WRITTEN AT LEAST 10 CHAPTERS..... IF YOU WANT TAKE THIS ADVICE..... OTHERWISE YOU CAN GO AND ROT IN HELL!!! AND YOU SUCK AGAIN.....

btw do you intend on CONTINUING this story???? Cuz 4 chapters just don't cut it!!! just update for goodness sake!!

he nevermind the critics, plz for the love of god UPDATE!!!

Mr.Dragonis, i know you think we all love waiting for updates... after we hav all the time in the world on our hands right??? ... i don't give a damn about this fic and whether u update it or not... YOU SUCK ALL OVER...

hey it's a great story so far but why aren't you updating frequently? I often check for updates... by the way is Harry a Saiyan? it would be awesome if he could go Super Saiyan!! keep going pal

you know what, your stories are very addictive as someone has already said but then as someone also said update sucks mate.... no offence but readers would love faster updates.... anyway keep it up... you rock

So far from what I've read it's a really good story and I hope that you will continue to update on this. I really can't tell you I love it because you really aren't far enough in order for me to decide. But for now I really like this story and I hope that you will update asap so I can read the next chapter until the next review

this is really great - i love all of your stories!! keep it up!

lol this is a cute story i cant wait till next chapter but i do have one wuestion i dont wanna seem stupid but w/e lol wat is dbz?? lol
anyywayzzz hope u answer me cuz i fell left out lol