AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/01/07
hmmm yea sure, i would continue it. i mean, only a couple more chapters or something, its not one of those that can goo tttttttooooo tooo far. so yea, good luck, keep writing, have fun!
muuuuuuucccch mmuuuuuuccch llooooove~! |
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Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
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it was very nice, really nice. i think i want more. yes, more. =) |
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BimrinSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
Well you got me hooked so keep it up. I hope to see another chapter soon. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
u cannot tell me tht tht is all...i must know if he comes back...i jus have to know!!! |
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DorianUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
It's really confusing, so I don't really know what to think or say.
I guess I'll understand more after the next chapter. |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
Wow.... While I would absolutely *love* to see this as a chaptered story, I think it's wonderful as a stand-alone. It's very powerful and emotional. It gave me chills! It really did. I almost think that this part would lose something if more was added to it. That's how much I think of it. Wonderful job on it!
~Cat |
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rasadamSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
Very strong emotions in this, I like it. I'm not sure if you really need to continue it, it's pretty good as a oneshot. If you do continue it, I'll be sure to read it!
Good job regardless! |
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Mr. BlackUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
of course you HAVE to continued this...I simply HATE unfinished stories, even if you decided to KILL harry (  ) it's better than no end. |
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RobertkSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
You have definitely touched a soft spot there. Not many people think of it as such, but you put it into good perspective.
You have got right to the heart of why war is so horrible. Not only the people who fight the war are affected. Most of the time it's the homeland and the people who sent them.
Incredible work,
Robertk
- Waiting for the next chapter to "What is love" |
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Well, personally, I think you should continue on with it, this chapter could leave a lot up in the air, depending on the reader's point of view and desire for more, it's totally your decision...This is very very well written, really sad, and is definitely gonna leave more readers wanting more!  You do a good job! Keep up the good work!!
Husker_fan_2006 |
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RavenUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
Nice, I really liked the letter...it was very emotional, but the right kind of emotional, and just perfect
Keep it up! |
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HolsUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/01/07
This might be an "experiment" as you say, but you better have an idea of where this is headed if it becomes a chaptered story because I WANT MORE!!! please? |
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